Comment from
bluetwo
A very sinister poem conveying a feeling of dread and impending doom. I get the feeling the subject is going insane and knows it.
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Comment Written 19-May-2008
reply by the author on 19-May-2008
Yes, that is how I feel sometimes, but I always manage to pull myself out. Others are not so lucky. But you are quite right in that was the feeling I wanted to convey. Thank you for a great review.