Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

This is a great poem to read on a Sunday. We often get told in church that it might be best to preach nothing other than repentance and faith. Nice job pointing out that physical death and spiritual death can only be overcome by coming back to God.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2025

Thanks Crystie, for these wonderful comments and encouraging review, blessings Roy

Comment from lyenochka

Exceptional

And the Lord asked Adam, "Where are you?" even though He knew perfectly where he was. He knows where all of us are and patiently waits for all to turn to Him in faith. I asked these very same questions and concluded that if there were no God, there would be no point in life so I returned to Him. Great poem, Roy!

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2025

Thanks Helen, for these wonderful comments and encouraging review, blessings Roy

Comment from Julie G1

Excellent

Well composed. This verse expresses a theme centered on the title. The poet explores belief with a skilful array of images in words. The reader appreciated the thoughtful essence here.

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 Comment Written 03-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2025

Thanks Julie, for these wonderful comments and encouraging review, blessings Roy

Comment from Domari

Exceptional

This really moved me. It's a beautifully written poem. I love the message. I love the rhythm of the verses. I loved everything about it :) Thank you for sharing this.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2025

Thanks for these wonderful comments and encouraging review, blessings Roy