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Viewing comments for Chapter 1 " Instead of 2025 Resolutions"Spiritual
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Comment from Pam (respa)
Good artwork and presentation, Debi. You wrote a good poem with effective imagery and rhyme. Each verse has a good message. The concluding verse addresses the key to your poem. I think that prayer is a daily thing, and we should never take anything for granted. As soon as you do, the bottom drops out. Your last line says a lot, and also makes a very good point.
Your descriptive statement said you needed more time with your family. I hope you accomplish that if that is your goal. Take care and have a very good New Year.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Good artwork and presentation, Debi. You wrote a good poem with effective imagery and rhyme. Each verse has a good message. The concluding verse addresses the key to your poem. I think that prayer is a daily thing, and we should never take anything for granted. As soon as you do, the bottom drops out. Your last line says a lot, and also makes a very good point.
Your descriptive statement said you needed more time with your family. I hope you accomplish that if that is your goal. Take care and have a very good New Year.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Hi Pam, It sounds like our idea of salvation is pretty much the same.
I thank you from the bottom of my heart for this lovely review and comments for my poem. As the last post of the year, I am so grateful you. This one was special to me as I will not be posting much next year.
Thank you again, my wonderful friend! Happy New Year!!
Love, Debi
Comment from patcelaw
This is probably one of the most God honoring things that we can do as opposed to having made resolutions. I wish you the very best with sharing the gospel with others so that they come to know the Lord as well and you have a wonderful day and may your new year be blessed. Patricia
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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This is probably one of the most God honoring things that we can do as opposed to having made resolutions. I wish you the very best with sharing the gospel with others so that they come to know the Lord as well and you have a wonderful day and may your new year be blessed. Patricia
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Patricia, It sounds like our idea of salvation is pretty much the same.
I thank you from the bottom of my heart for this lovely review and comments for my poem. As the last post of the year, I am so grateful you. This one was special to me. Thank you again, my wonderful friend!
Love, Debi
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For me through the years when I was a speaker for Christian women's club the important part of my speaking was to share the gospel with the folks. I spoke 42 different times and I saw over 50 ladies make decisions for the Lord in those times.
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Yes, I know. Remember I wrote all that in your birthday tribute. I even remember that you are a bit of a stand up comic. I love it! Happy New Year, dear friend. Debi
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Debi,
This is a lovely poem. I too have family that doesn't believe and it hurts my heart. They don't believe he exists. They will stay on earth and burn with everything else.
Well done my friend.
Happy New Year
Cecilia
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Debi,
This is a lovely poem. I too have family that doesn't believe and it hurts my heart. They don't believe he exists. They will stay on earth and burn with everything else.
Well done my friend.
Happy New Year
Cecilia
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Hi Cecilia, It sounds like our idea of salvation is pretty close.I thank you from the bottom of my heart for this lovely review and comments for my poem. As the last post of the year, I am so grateful you. This one was special to me. Thank you again, my wonderful friend!
Love, Debi
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You are welcome my sweet friend.. I hope you have a great evening and a Happy New Year.
This old girl is going to bed.
Comment from Wendy G
An excellent poem for the new year, and well written. I like the image with the focus on a godly nation, and that will mean a humble one as well. (Greatness in the eyes of the world is a different and not necessarily noble goal.) Yes, our focus should be on living closely with Jesus and encouraging others to do likewise. Thank you for sharing.
Wendy
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An excellent poem for the new year, and well written. I like the image with the focus on a godly nation, and that will mean a humble one as well. (Greatness in the eyes of the world is a different and not necessarily noble goal.) Yes, our focus should be on living closely with Jesus and encouraging others to do likewise. Thank you for sharing.
Wendy
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Hi Wendy, It sounds like our idea of salvation is pretty much the same .
I thank you from the bottom of my heart for this lovely review and comments for my poem. As the last post of the year, I am so grateful you. This one was special to me. Thank you again, my wonderful friend!
Love, Debi
Comment from Rick Gardner
Powerful, words to follow, words of the truth. May I add my own?
The Devine
The divine is given, it is why we are here,
Directed by our Lord, loud and clear,
Life given. by Devine origin,
Give to the one born for all, in death a life to begin,
A thankful harmony, always forgiven
Deny any that wish you to sin
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Powerful, words to follow, words of the truth. May I add my own?
The Devine
The divine is given, it is why we are here,
Directed by our Lord, loud and clear,
Life given. by Devine origin,
Give to the one born for all, in death a life to begin,
A thankful harmony, always forgiven
Deny any that wish you to sin
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Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Dear Rick, It sounds like our idea of salvation is pretty close.
I thank you very much for the review and comments for my poem. As the last post of the year, I am so grateful you. This one was special to me. Thank you again, my wonderful friend!
Love, Debi
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Hi Debi,.I like your poem. You address important things in your poem that everyone should think about it. I enjoyed reading it. Well written. I just posted a small.poem about the New year and the positive things we can do. Great job. Love, Brenda
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Hi Debi,.I like your poem. You address important things in your poem that everyone should think about it. I enjoyed reading it. Well written. I just posted a small.poem about the New year and the positive things we can do. Great job. Love, Brenda
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Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Hi Brenda, It sounds like our idea of salvation is pretty much the same.
I thank you from the bottom of my heart for this lovely review and comments for my poem. As the last post of the year, I am so grateful you. This one was special to me. Thank you again, my wonderful friend!
Love, Debi
Comment from Begin Again
I must give you a six and higher if I could because this is the best thought we all should have s we enter the New Year. Our family and friends and ourselves need to believe and be ready for the Lord to come. We don't know when but we do know how and if we don't accept him now, it will be too late. I pray the Lord knows I am a sinner, but that I believe in Him and know that he forgives me and will show me the light.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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I must give you a six and higher if I could because this is the best thought we all should have s we enter the New Year. Our family and friends and ourselves need to believe and be ready for the Lord to come. We don't know when but we do know how and if we don't accept him now, it will be too late. I pray the Lord knows I am a sinner, but that I believe in Him and know that he forgives me and will show me the light.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Hi Carol, I can tell you and I have the same spiritual upbringing. And It sounds like our idea of salvation is pretty much the same. The six stars I am dedicating in honor of Rhonda's husband.
I thank you from the bottom of my heart for this lovely review and comments for my poem. As the last post of the year, I am so grateful you. This one was special to me. Thank you again, my wonderful friend!
Love, Debi
