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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a powerful poem and I couldn't think of a more painful death than burning in a fire, your few short words describe the scars of fire and how we are powerless to battle against this mighty force, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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This is a powerful poem and I couldn't think of a more painful death than burning in a fire, your few short words describe the scars of fire and how we are powerless to battle against this mighty force, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Dolly! That's so great. What an awesome I do I appreciate so much! They don't give you a lot of room in these kinds of poems to be impactful, that's for sure! Thank you again, I hope that you're you and yours are doing well!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This verse dramatically conveys a sense of release and liberation following death by fire. It's infused with poignancy, blended with everlasting hope of resurrection. Well done, Lea, and good luck! Debbie
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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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This verse dramatically conveys a sense of release and liberation following death by fire. It's infused with poignancy, blended with everlasting hope of resurrection. Well done, Lea, and good luck! Debbie
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Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Thanks, Debbie! You always have great reviews. I appreciate so much! I'm glad you like the poem and have offered your thoughts on it. I take all of you very seriously. And all the things that say twitter, otherwise, so thank you again.I hope you have a great evening!