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Prayers for Wayne, Rhonda's Husband

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Rhonda's husband had a stroke

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Comment from forestport12
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Oh my goodness. I'm glad I read this. I would not have known what recently happened with Rhonda's father. So glad prayers were answered. God's grace sustains us. Everyday a day of grace. And I loved how this picture works with a truly heartfelt poem.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
    Thanks for reviewing...

    I should have made it clear that Wayne is Rhonda's husband. I'll add that to the authors notes!

    Karenina
reply by forestport12 on 27-Oct-2024
    oh I was a bit confused. To be honest, I read her recent post, and I hope I got it right when I read hers. Appreciate you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is well written with perfect rhymes and flow Karenina and I adored your warm and caring sentiment here as you think of Rhonda's husband after his stroke. A touching poem, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
    Many thanks, Dolly!

    May Wayne continue to make strides toward complete recovery!

    Karenina
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hello K.
This is outstanding. You incorporated the individual events that led to the event, and you essentially created a complete narrative of the continuing happenings. Your verse and meter are sound and read easily. This is nicely written.

Z

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
    Hey, Z!

    Thanks for the sixer!

    It's so very nice to read your reviews again! Like old times!

    K
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 27-Oct-2024
    You're welcome
Comment from Ric Myworld
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It's wonderful that a son's knowings of the right things to do and acting quickly can thwart what may have otherwise been deadly. I'm so thankful for Wayne, Rhonda, and the family!

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
    Hi, Ric...

    I don't have a cell phone, but if and when I do break down and buy one, I want that App!

    Thanks,

    Karenina
Comment from bob cullen
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So many of my reviews start the same. Sorry, I'm out of sixes. I once had a Marist Brother tell me; 'God looks after the best. I guess your poem adds proof to that old Brother's Faith and boast. A fabulous poem with an even better outcome. Best of wishes to your Dad and to your life on the land. And one more big thank you from all us city slickers to you fantastic producers of our food.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
    Thanks so much.

    I'm sure Rhonda is taking some comfort from her FanStory friends and family!

    Karenina
Comment from Janet Foor
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This is a wonderful poem of faith for the healing of Wayne and the amazing strides of medicine for stroke victims. My grandson had a stoke last year at age 23. After emergency surgery, he has made a full recovery. I pray that Wayne will make a full recovery as well.

Thank you for sharing.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
    Oh, Janet!

    So young! Thank God your grandson is fully recovered!

    Prayers continue for Wayne...

    Thanks,

    Karenina
Comment from Julie Helms
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This is a wonderfully written poem that celebrates God's mercy and faithfulness! May Rhonda be uplifted by the outpouring of prayers and support. Really nicely done.
Julie
:-)

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
    Thank you so much, Julie...

    I appreciate your review and continue to pray for Wayne!

    Karenina
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
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Did you see that? Wow, it was really big! It looks like, yes, I recognize it. It is Karenina's muse back. And Wow, it is back with a vengeance. That MIA MUSE has been somewhere charging its power because it has completely found its place back with its master and there is no stopping it now..................

Holy Macaroni, MS Muse, that was awesome. I love this new rhyming side of poetry.. I know it isn't like you never rhymed but you have a structure to it now and it works beautifully for you. I love the 8 6 8 6 syllable structure and always been some of my favorite

I can't say enough how lovely your verses are. I love the most, "The fam'ly gathered 'round in prayer. The Holy Spirit beamed." What a wonderful vision that is. So thank you K's muse for coming back for this occasion. Virtual Ten!!!
I thank you, Rhonda and Wayne will thank you and I bet K thanks you big time. This was awesome!!! Love, Debi

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
    Wow!

    I know I don't post very much, but this review is awesome!

    I guess God's great miracle inspired me!

    Continued prayers for Wayne!

    Karenina
reply by Debi Pick Marquette on 27-Oct-2024
    Maybe I got a little too silly with it but I was in one of those moods and you deserved to have your praises sung.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
    You are adorably effusive! My muse comes so rarely I enjoyed your enthusiasm!
reply by Debi Pick Marquette on 27-Oct-2024
    ♥️ I used an emoji to separate every stanza in Steve, Neonewman's birthday poem. I did it because I used some humor in it. If you are still up will you give me your opinion in a pm? It it done but I don't have the music added yet.
    It should be about 15 minutes.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
    Sure thing! I'll check back then.
reply by Debi Pick Marquette on 27-Oct-2024
    It's promoted and after you look at it I am going to change the art and ask which one you like best.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
    I responded and your end result was perfect quad you will read in my review, already posted!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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And still there are folks who cannot see beyond their nose denying the Great I Am
But those with faith know that after all we do/did/ or shall accomplish our greatest assets are given us divinely

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
    Absolutely, Tom!

    Faith sustains us...

    Without it we are empty vessels!

    Thanks,

    Karenina
Comment from Carol Clark2
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This is a lovely poem for Wayne and Rhonda. Thanks for telling the story of Wayne's brush with death with good details. I've been praying for Wayne's recovery, as I'm sure many on FS are doing. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
    Rhonda said it best calling us prayer warriors...

    Wayne surely is blessed!

    May his recovery continue with each passing day!

    Karenina