Comment from Lisasview

Excellent

Wow, what another amazing poem that just spills out from you my dear friend... And, is always a joy to read.
Loved this one...
Once a long long time ago my mother was in a commercial during the Super Bowl... Christopher Reeves was in his wheel chair and my mother played his mother...
So your poem prompted that memory in me.
Lisa

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024

Hey sweet Lisa, and thanks so much. You are too kind. When I looked at my poem this morning I could tell that the wrap form did not work well with this one, as it left it too bumpy. So I disabled it and worked it into a monorhyme and think it's much better now. So thank you for being so gracious about it, my dear friend.
Love, Debi

reply by Lisasview on 11-Feb-2024

Oh, really... I thought you did an excellent job... but if you are not happy with something I do think it is wonderful if you make it even better.
I wrote you a couple of meails but did not hear back?
Lisa

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024

Yes, I meant to tell you that I am finishing up here and coming over to check my emails.

reply by Lisasview on 11-Feb-2024

You always have a marvelous way of making me smile!!

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Tsk, tsk, now, now... (HAHAHAHAHA -- "player with mass, may kick some... grass")

This is me, excited about the Super Bowl today... Not. LOL.

But your poem was fun, Debi. :))


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 Comment Written 11-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024

Hi there Dawn, and thanks so much. You are too kind. When I looked at my poem this morning I could tell that the wrap form did not work well with this one, as it left it too bumpy. So I disabled it and worked it into a monorhyme and think it's much better now. So thank you for being so gracious about it, my dear friend.
Love, Debi

reply by Dawn Munro on 11-Feb-2024

I'll check it out. :)