Apple Pie Hill
This is a rhymed poem.42 total reviews
Comment from Sallyo
I loved this one... so many reasons to go to Apple Pie Hill. My "local" is Dooleys Hill which also abounds in marvels. The length of this poem allows you to pile wonder upon wonder. My favourite stanza is number 6. That's when I really sat up...and the rest of the poem stands up to it.
Just one thing... red-pedaled Goat's Rue and ... should this be "petalled (or petaled")? Or are you using a term I just don't know?
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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I loved this one... so many reasons to go to Apple Pie Hill. My "local" is Dooleys Hill which also abounds in marvels. The length of this poem allows you to pile wonder upon wonder. My favourite stanza is number 6. That's when I really sat up...and the rest of the poem stands up to it.
Just one thing... red-pedaled Goat's Rue and ... should this be "petalled (or petaled")? Or are you using a term I just don't know?
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Hello Sally. Thank you for the wonderful review and rating for my poem, Apple Pie Hill. I?m glad you enjoyed the descriptive imagery and the rhymes. Dooley's Hill sounds like a marvelous place.
Thanks for noting the typo on "red-pedaled". For some reason Word doesn't like the correct spelling. The "d" should be a "t".
I appreciated the encouraging comments and six stars very much.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It sounds like there is a lot to see here, full of activity in this wood of wildlife, flowers and trees, I enjoyed this entertaining poem and would like to visit Apple Pie Hill and see it all first hand, but for now I am seeing this little world through your eyes, a well rhymed and metered post, love Dolly x x. x
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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It sounds like there is a lot to see here, full of activity in this wood of wildlife, flowers and trees, I enjoyed this entertaining poem and would like to visit Apple Pie Hill and see it all first hand, but for now I am seeing this little world through your eyes, a well rhymed and metered post, love Dolly x x. x
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Hello Dolly. Thank you for the marvelous review and rating for my poem, Apple Pie Hill. I?m glad you enjoyed the descriptive imagery and the rhymes. I've hiked the sandy trails many times over the years.
I appreciated the encouraging comments and six stars very much.
Best wishes.
Robert
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You are most welcome Robert, this is a magical post x