Comment from Iza Deleanu

Exceptional

So clever you are with this exchange of cat advice, one thing I would add to the plot make your balcony kitty proof you know what happened to my curious boy...

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023

Iza, did you realize that Patch was Helen's cat that I am writing about? I couldn't believe it when my granddaughter who does my art here said her cat was acting like it knew it was going to move. And I said that darn Patch did that. Lol... Oh Sweetie, you are so very kind and I thank you for the awesome review and comments, as well as the gracious six stars for this poem. It is all very much appreciated.

reply by Iza Deleanu on 13-Sep-2023

Yup, I know:) but I was thinking you are planning one too:)

Comment from lyenochka

Exceptional

That's so funny and cute!

I laughed at:
Patch wears the pants in Helen's house, but Ruby wears a dress

I hope Kenzie finds her ring! Those naughty kitties plotting over zoom! ð??¸

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023

LOL, thank you Helen. I was in a silly mood today and you inspired me so much, after Kenzie told me that she is moving and Ruby is sensing the tension and acting weird. I started laughing and told her about Patch and your hilarious stories. So even tho Kenz is not a missus, she does have lots of rings as her boyfriend is a jeweler. She will think the poem is great.

reply by lyenochka on 11-Sep-2023

Thank you for remembering all of us, especially Patch. She wishes Ruby the best in the move ❤️🙏

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

Writing a poem with 14-syllable lines is quite a challenge, but you have handled it well to provide this story-in-a-poem of 2 plotting cats. As a cat lover myself, I know what mischief mine gets up to, but when 2 combine to act like sly fox, of course there will be trouble! My cat keeps hiding things in my slippers, thank goodness not in the litter box (yet).

Correction in this line:

Now that the two are zooming, both the kitty's are good friends

(In this context it is 'kitties' - being plural and not possessive.)

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023

Aha, thank you so much. Actually when I read it earlier, I caught that and then went in to edit and caught something else and forgot that. So you are a sweetheart. I am so glad you told me.
Have you read the stories that Helen posts about Patch? I have loved her stories about how Patch was taking their move so now when Ruby has to go, I thought I would jump on the band wagon. Ruby belongs to my granddaughter, Kenzie who does most of my art. It was fun to do and I thank you again for the fun review and comments and your awesome feedback.

reply by LisaMay on 11-Sep-2023

I've read some of Helen's Patch stories and enjoyed them.
I hope the move goes well for Ruby - change can be upsetting for everyone.

I like hearing from the animal's POV, such as Wendy G's dog Sunny also.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem, Patch and Ruby's Plan, presented in four AADD-rhymed quatrains, shows that those cats are not to be trusted. Now I already know this about cats, but others learn like this. : )

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

Hey Bill! I thank you so much for this kind review and comments for my Patch and Ruby poem.
After Kenzie said they were moving and Ruby was acting strange, I needed to have a little laugh. I appreciate your very kind comments for it and for having a little fun with me.
Thank you again, my dear friend.

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Aww! Poor Patch on the move. But maybe they can hatch a plan to delay or stop this because they're obviously a pair of very smart felines! Thanks for sharing, Debi. Debbie

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 Comment Written 11-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

Hi Debbie, I thank you so much for this kind review and comments for my Patch and Ruby poem.
After Kenzie said they were moving and Ruby was acting strange, I needed to have a little laugh. I appreciate your very kind comments for it and for having a little fun with me.
Thank you again, my dear friend.

Comment from JSD

Excellent

Wow! Those cats sound fairly mischievous! A lovely, funny poem which conveys their relationship perfectly, although I worry that they're taking over. Thanks for sharing this!

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 Comment Written 11-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

Hi John, I thank you so much for this kind review and comments for my Patch and Ruby poem.
After Kenzie said they were moving and Ruby was acting strange, I needed to have a little laugh. I appreciate your very kind comments for it and for having a little fun with me.
Thank you again, my dear friend.