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Comment from Ginda Simpson
And what a great sister act you two are. Double the fun, lifting us out of the doldrums and soar in the sunshine of life. Your talent for rhyming is amazing.
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And what a great sister act you two are. Double the fun, lifting us out of the doldrums and soar in the sunshine of life. Your talent for rhyming is amazing.
Comment Written 11-May-2023
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I liked your bouncy poem filled with your personality. I love how you choose happiness, even through difficulties. That's one of the reasons why your poetry is special.
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I liked your bouncy poem filled with your personality. I love how you choose happiness, even through difficulties. That's one of the reasons why your poetry is special.
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Comment Written 11-May-2023
Comment from nomi338
Awesome. As grateful as I am, and I am grateful for your having written this greatly amusing and entertaining poem. I am also grateful that I am able to award you six stars. Six stars for quality, for entertainment value, for ingenuity, for just overall quality. Wonderful work from a wonderfully gifted writer.
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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Awesome. As grateful as I am, and I am grateful for your having written this greatly amusing and entertaining poem. I am also grateful that I am able to award you six stars. Six stars for quality, for entertainment value, for ingenuity, for just overall quality. Wonderful work from a wonderfully gifted writer.
Comment Written 11-May-2023
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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Oh Nomi, I apologize for this being so late. My eye specialist has restricted my time on my ipad until next months surgeries. But I still am on here way more than I am allowed. I do read them all as they come in and although I am late, I do keep plucking away at them. But I wanted to make sure you knew how much your awesome review means to me. Thank you so much for your very kind words for my MGR poem and your gracious gift of six stars. They are so appreciated, my dear friend!
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Oh my dearly beloved little sis. I love you so much. I pray to the great healer, Almighty God, please completely heal my little sister. Just those parts that need healing. There is nothing wrong with her heart.
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Your prayers mean the world to me and I am always grateful for you, dear love!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I love reading your merry go poems. They are cheerful and that's what we need to create a smile. When we write, we need to begin from scratch; then it becomes our own idea.
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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I love reading your merry go poems. They are cheerful and that's what we need to create a smile. When we write, we need to begin from scratch; then it becomes our own idea.
Comment Written 11-May-2023
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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Rosemary, I apologize for this being so late. My eye specialist has tried to restrict my time on my ipad until next months surgeries. I do read them all as they come in and although I am late, I do keep plucking away at them. But I wanted to make sure you knew how much your awesome review means to me. Thank you so much for your very kind words for my MGR poem and your gracious gift of six stars. They are so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from Douglas Goff
Oh my, answering a question with a question that only leds to more questions.
Great poem. Quite fun. This line was cute:
So as I'm on my merry way, I hear bells starts to chime
They're part of music in my head, and they all want to rhyme
This is a very enjoyable read!
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Oh my, answering a question with a question that only leds to more questions.
Great poem. Quite fun. This line was cute:
So as I'm on my merry way, I hear bells starts to chime
They're part of music in my head, and they all want to rhyme
This is a very enjoyable read!
D
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Comment Written 11-May-2023