Old Writers
Rhyming quatrains44 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
This is lovely and so true! Old poets do share what they have learned in their journey through the seasons of life. Great imagery and perfect rhythm and rhyme. I loved it.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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This is lovely and so true! Old poets do share what they have learned in their journey through the seasons of life. Great imagery and perfect rhythm and rhyme. I loved it.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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Hi June. Thank you, dear lady, for your wonderful comments! I am delighted you liked it!!
Melissa
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
After decades of living, you have seen a lot. There is an old saying, "write what you know.". There are many lessons to learn in life. Minds are precious things, and they should not be wasted. I would be happy if I could help one person. That is to learn from certain mistakes. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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After decades of living, you have seen a lot. There is an old saying, "write what you know.". There are many lessons to learn in life. Minds are precious things, and they should not be wasted. I would be happy if I could help one person. That is to learn from certain mistakes. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much Carolyn!!
Melissa
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Ohh, how my musician's ear has missed the beautiful rhythm and rhyme that is your poetry, my talented friend. Another beauty, this one; that's for sure. It wraps me just right in my favorite season. Thank you for this delight today! xo
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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Ohh, how my musician's ear has missed the beautiful rhythm and rhyme that is your poetry, my talented friend. Another beauty, this one; that's for sure. It wraps me just right in my favorite season. Thank you for this delight today! xo
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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Hi sweet Rachelle. Thank you, dearest, for your lovely words. How they encourage this poet's heart. I am delighted you like it!!
Melissa
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I don't believe there was ever a poem of yours that I haven't just loved. xo
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Xo
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This verse explores the way a poet or poetess wields their pen to lace words together creating beauty of thought.
I appreciate the presentation as well a the sentiment left.
The use of the repeated refrain is effective at looping the reader back the beginning and the intended theme.
Your ability to word paint is excellent as is your phraseology.
The rhymes are silky smooth and drip down the page effortlessly.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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This verse explores the way a poet or poetess wields their pen to lace words together creating beauty of thought.
I appreciate the presentation as well a the sentiment left.
The use of the repeated refrain is effective at looping the reader back the beginning and the intended theme.
Your ability to word paint is excellent as is your phraseology.
The rhymes are silky smooth and drip down the page effortlessly.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
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Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much. I am delighted that you liked it KL!
Melissa