The Green Shirt
Common Ground is Our Only Hope49 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
It's peoples hatred for g and nothing in particular. It isn't race related but just plain hate. If thy can't be happy they want to punish anyone who gets in their way just like Putin he hates everyone probably even himself because he is dying and has nothing to lose if convicted for his war crimes. He is as they say in prison "dead man walking!" As the walk hi the green mile to his death.
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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It's peoples hatred for g and nothing in particular. It isn't race related but just plain hate. If thy can't be happy they want to punish anyone who gets in their way just like Putin he hates everyone probably even himself because he is dying and has nothing to lose if convicted for his war crimes. He is as they say in prison "dead man walking!" As the walk hi the green mile to his death.
Comment Written 20-May-2022
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Thanks for sharing your thoughts and your time with me. I appreciate both.
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Comment from country ranch writer
It's peoples hatred for g and nothing in particular. It isn't race related but just plain hate. If thy can't be happy they want to punish anyone who gets in their way just like Putin he hates everyone probably even himself because he is dying and has nothing to lose if convicted for his war crimes. He is as they say in prison "dead man walking!" As the walk hi the green mile to his death.
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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It's peoples hatred for g and nothing in particular. It isn't race related but just plain hate. If thy can't be happy they want to punish anyone who gets in their way just like Putin he hates everyone probably even himself because he is dying and has nothing to lose if convicted for his war crimes. He is as they say in prison "dead man walking!" As the walk hi the green mile to his death.
Comment Written 20-May-2022
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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okay
Comment from Teri7
Amen! This is a very well written contest entry you have penned and so full of the truth and very good words. The art work you chose goes well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Amen! This is a very well written contest entry you have penned and so full of the truth and very good words. The art work you chose goes well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 20-May-2022
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Thanks so much for reading and commenting.
Comment from LJbutterfly
I enjoyed this story, along with the thought-provoking message it provides. I am a retired early childhood teacher, and am reminded of many incidents similar to your experience, where young children fail to notice race or color. In keeping with your theme, I'm inspired to write one such story and will give credit to you once your identity is revealed. Thanks for sharing, and for inspiration. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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I enjoyed this story, along with the thought-provoking message it provides. I am a retired early childhood teacher, and am reminded of many incidents similar to your experience, where young children fail to notice race or color. In keeping with your theme, I'm inspired to write one such story and will give credit to you once your identity is revealed. Thanks for sharing, and for inspiration. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 20-May-2022
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Can't wait to read your story! I'll be watching for it. Thank you for your kind words, sharing your thoughts and your time with me.
Comment from Bridge
A simple but lovely story. I loved it. I completely agree with the message in the story. Very well written. Thanks for sharing. All the best to you in the contest
With regards
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A simple but lovely story. I loved it. I completely agree with the message in the story. Very well written. Thanks for sharing. All the best to you in the contest
With regards
Comment Written 20-May-2022
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Need all the luck I can get in the contest. The competition is always stiff.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces a realisation that there is only one race, the human race and it comes with many colours and attributes.
The work highlights a five year old child's realisation of this fact and the need for it to be imbibed as a measuring yardstick that gives credence to the oneness of the human race.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of anecdotes synonymous with the oneness of the human race.
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces a realisation that there is only one race, the human race and it comes with many colours and attributes.
The work highlights a five year old child's realisation of this fact and the need for it to be imbibed as a measuring yardstick that gives credence to the oneness of the human race.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of anecdotes synonymous with the oneness of the human race.
Comment Written 20-May-2022
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Thank you.
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Remain Blessed.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Great story. Keep repeating it.
wisdon and instill this desire in their own children - oops
There is hope and I believe in it - comma after 'hope' and ending period
Best wishes and good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Great story. Keep repeating it.
wisdon and instill this desire in their own children - oops
There is hope and I believe in it - comma after 'hope' and ending period
Best wishes and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 20-May-2022
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Thank you.. Suggested corrections have been made. thanks
Comment from Malcolm Rothery
Children, like animals, see past colour, disability and other differences. It's the adults they learn from that lead them down the wrong path. Great story with a great message.
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reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Children, like animals, see past colour, disability and other differences. It's the adults they learn from that lead them down the wrong path. Great story with a great message.
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Comment Written 20-May-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from leather
This is a great recounting made better only because it is a true story. This poem is inspiring and heart warming. I think you have a very solid entry, and I wish you the best with the contest.
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This is a great recounting made better only because it is a true story. This poem is inspiring and heart warming. I think you have a very solid entry, and I wish you the best with the contest.
Comment Written 20-May-2022
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Thank you.
