Jealousy
An Acrostic- Loop Poem33 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
This is a very eye-catching presentation and your words are woven together well to show the damage of jealousy in a relationship. It does become obsessive and stops the jealous one from listening to reason.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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This is a very eye-catching presentation and your words are woven together well to show the damage of jealousy in a relationship. It does become obsessive and stops the jealous one from listening to reason.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Jg
Succinct!!! This poem has been well written , maybe because I actually observe situations and people, sadly this is just how a jealous person behaves , and your poem was able to echo the sentiments well. Showed me you totally understood this topic , if possible had to deal with situations resulting from same . Whatever the situation the poem has been beautifully written . Well done .
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Succinct!!! This poem has been well written , maybe because I actually observe situations and people, sadly this is just how a jealous person behaves , and your poem was able to echo the sentiments well. Showed me you totally understood this topic , if possible had to deal with situations resulting from same . Whatever the situation the poem has been beautifully written . Well done .
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much
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Very welcome
Comment from Ayan3
That was an amazing piece of writing and I hope you can write more stories and I also could not stop reading it and I hope you get the recognition you need for this piece of writing.
Sincerely, Ayan
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That was an amazing piece of writing and I hope you can write more stories and I also could not stop reading it and I hope you get the recognition you need for this piece of writing.
Sincerely, Ayan
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much