Angel of Ireland~ For Shannon
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Comment from Darlene Franklin
I like how you used an angel story--about death no less--to illustrate the need for generosity to those in need. Thank you very much for sharing from your heart.
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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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I like how you used an angel story--about death no less--to illustrate the need for generosity to those in need. Thank you very much for sharing from your heart.
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Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Good afternoon, Darlene. It is so good to see you. I really appreciate your kind review and commemts. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from Loren .
How could I not give a six to this sweet and lovely story, so well told with a bit of Irish lilt thrown in. It was also a story of faith and hope and the revelation that God and His visiting Angels are real! I think you meant 'Hmm' here. "She did? I've never said a word. Hum"
Great job, Sally. Loren
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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How could I not give a six to this sweet and lovely story, so well told with a bit of Irish lilt thrown in. It was also a story of faith and hope and the revelation that God and His visiting Angels are real! I think you meant 'Hmm' here. "She did? I've never said a word. Hum"
Great job, Sally. Loren
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Dear Loren, thank you so much. I am honored once again by your complimentary review and generous stars. I did mean hmm.... Thanks. My blind assist keyboard has an attitude. LOL! Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from BethShelby
This is a beautiful story you have created. Since this story is for Shannon, I'm assuming that Shannon is a real person who was adopted. It is quite a moving story. It brought a tear to my eye.
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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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This is a beautiful story you have created. Since this story is for Shannon, I'm assuming that Shannon is a real person who was adopted. It is quite a moving story. It brought a tear to my eye.
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Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you, dear Beth. I'm so pleased you and so many others have enjoyed this. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from roof35
This is a wonderful story and so needed in these desperate times. Your writing is beautiful. I could see your characters through your words. I would mention a little typo just so you can fix it-- "That's you (r) house."
Thank you so much for sharing this.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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This is a wonderful story and so needed in these desperate times. Your writing is beautiful. I could see your characters through your words. I would mention a little typo just so you can fix it-- "That's you (r) house."
Thank you so much for sharing this.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Dear Roof, thank you so much for the kind review and star blast! I am honored. Thanks for catching what my blind eyes miss at times. It is greatly needed. :)
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from barbara.wilkey
All I can say about this wonderful and emotional post us AMEN!!!!!
Her red hair was unkept, a loose braid she'd tried to remedy on her own. She wore a yellow rain slicker accented with polka-dotted rain boots. Most noteworthy, was her scrappy, one-eyed teddy bear. No doubt, the daughter born of Ireland was an adorable creature. She did not walk, however, she marched; Teddy dangling by one arm. (loved this description)
"Thank you, Doctor. "Shannon, fetch my purse that I may pay...." (Don't need the quotation mark before Shannon.)
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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All I can say about this wonderful and emotional post us AMEN!!!!!
Her red hair was unkept, a loose braid she'd tried to remedy on her own. She wore a yellow rain slicker accented with polka-dotted rain boots. Most noteworthy, was her scrappy, one-eyed teddy bear. No doubt, the daughter born of Ireland was an adorable creature. She did not walk, however, she marched; Teddy dangling by one arm. (loved this description)
"Thank you, Doctor. "Shannon, fetch my purse that I may pay...." (Don't need the quotation mark before Shannon.)
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you, dear Barbara. I'm just delighted you enjoyed this. I was in the mood for a feel good story. Once again, I am honored and blessed, dear one. Thank your helpful critique and many kindnesses. :)
Sending you my best today as always,. Sally xoxo