Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.

Excellent

This is definitely a chapter that preteens would love. it is very well written, with appealing characters and natural and flowing conversations. This is a promising book.

 Comment Written 13-May-2020

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reply by the author on 14-May-2020

Oh, I hope so, Rebecca! ;) :) Thanx so much for keeping up with the shed -- hoping to get this wrapped up before summer's end... but we'll see what lies ahead!! ;) Take care, my lady! ;) Yvette

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 14-May-2020

You're an excellent writer so I am sure you will come up with something unusual for me to read. Ha ha

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

This is delightful. What whimsy, wit, and wry humor! Wonderful characters, banter, descriptions throughout. Surely this will be a treat for the tween-age set. Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 13-May-2020

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reply by the author on 14-May-2020

So glad you dropped in on this chapter, LIZ -- hoping to get this wrapped up before summer's end... but we'll see what lies ahead!! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Well, that's quite a show for the young groundskeeper. It seems he was asked to become judge over the whole situation but I don't know how he could. And what is this "blueberry of power?" I like armadillos so I'm rooting for Archie. He must have a reason for all he's doing.

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 Comment Written 13-May-2020

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reply by the author on 14-May-2020

It's more Jerry's theatrics than anything, but the blueberries are a special treat for them... :) ;) Archie's a good 'imp tamer', don't you think? ;) :) Thanx so much for keeping up with the shed -- hoping to get this wrapped up before summer's end... but we'll see what lies ahead!! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette