Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

There's one horrible situation after another in this novel. I have no idea what Veronica is going to do, but everybody has to be okay so things can get back to normal. Mildred needs to be back in her correct time.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019

Things are coming to a head. Next chapter will hopefully sort some of it out. But, Ver is not happy with the Powers. Bless you, my friend, I loved your review. :) Sandra xxx

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Exceptional

Poor Veronica. Those Powers have no respect for her, after all she's doing for them. They treat her like a slave. She should find them and demand a salary increase or threaten to quit.

Bolts! Of course. Makes all the difference.

I have a question. Why can she move lightweight things? She has NO mass at all, so she should not be able to move even a feather.

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019

Thank you so much, my dear friend, for the lovely six stars. :)) Things aren't going very well for Veronica at the moment, and no, she isn't at all happy with the powers.

I think I'll have to put a little bit about what and how Veronica can do what she can. Do you remember in the first book of this trilogy, the ghost of Lady Ann who was murdered with Vicar Peter and thrown in the cespit by her husband, Sir John? She taught Veronica to walk through doors, and hold the diaries, and even taught her to write little notes. They had a lot of fun tormenting her murdering husband. But anything heavier than the diaries are a no go. It came in handy for the last book and now this one. I was going by what Patrick Swayze could do in Ghost. (Loved that film)

Thanks again, my friend. :)) xxx

reply by Phyllis Stewart on 10-Feb-2019

Yes, she was taught. I had forgotten that. You might add a reminder.

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Hi Sandra,

It's always fascinating to read your chapters :) You are doing a terrific job with this story. Never a dull moment. I like it when Veronica has to think her way through all the hurdles in her way. I'd just give up. Can she not go through walls to see what is on the other side of the bolted door?

Joy xx

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019

Thank you so much for another lovely review, Joy. Yes, Veronica can walk through walls, stick her head through to have a look. But, she is frightened, she scared at what she might see. As far as she knows, they could all be dead, and she'd feel it was all her fault. That is why she is so angry at the powers-that-be. She'll know very soon, so will you!! :)) Stay tuned, my friend. Big hugs. :) Sandra xxx

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

Oh wow! I was into it with her. Anxious and really nervous that things were not going well. Why do people run when they see something like that. I would freeze I think. LOL Well she did it, but we have to wait until the next post to see if she was able to save them from the smoke. Well done Sandra. Nancy:)

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019

Do you know? I think I would freeze, too! It's a shame that lot didn't. it would have saved her loads of time. Now, to see what lies behind the door. Thank you so much, my friend, for another lovely review. Big hugs. Sandra. xxx

Comment from l.raven

Exceptional

you dreaded what you would see?...well!!! move over and let me look...Hi Sandra, Veronica needs to calm down...ok...deep breaths...you know how that has to look with her running down the hall with scissors in her hand??...to say the least...she can't be seen...I told you the Powers weren't playing with a full deck...what are they thinking?...but at least she got the door open...the other room was a sewing room...this will most likely be a laundry room...what next???...and of course all those people are moving slow...their in a hospital...their sedated...they think their going to the theater...very well written you lovely person you...now lets see what's going on behind door #1...ya know I love your story told...love you so lots my wonderful friend...Linda xxoo

say hi to Ian for me...and Sarah as well...blessings to them both...xxoo love

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019

LOL. LOL! move over and let me see!!! I have to tell you, Linda, you wouldn't want to be looking around that door, it's going to be awful! OMG, I just don't know how I'm going to write it, it's just too awful for words! Hmm, perhaps if you look first.... you could tell me? I hate seeing horrible things. :)) LOL!!!

Thank you so very much for the lovely shiny six, and this funny, wonderful review. I expect you'll only give me a 1 star next time! LOL. Love you lots, my lovely friend. Biggest hugs coming over the pond, :)) Sandra xxx

I will. Ian and Sarah are both so much stronger than I could ever be.

But, what about you, now? How's it going? Are you still in pain? Is it going down? Or will it take a while? Keep me up to date, won't you? I'm really worried about you. You're in my prayers, my friend. xxxxxx

reply by l.raven on 10-Feb-2019

sure I'll look...let my get my trusty pin light...the one I used to us when I looked in women's purses when I was a bouncer...LOL...now the only thing I bouncer on is the couch...and you are so welcome always you...smiling big back at you...much love...and I would never one stars you...hummmm...kidding...

I go see the doc tomorrow...feeling better...but not there yet...going to be interested what this doc will say...he took a lot of biopsies out of there...I well let you know...not to worry...and you are all in my prayers...muchhhhh love xxoo

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019

I'll be thinking of you, and hoping it's good news. Keep that smile, you have the best of the best watching over you, He won't let you down. xxxxx

reply by l.raven on 10-Feb-2019

no He won't...smiling...love you...xxoo

Comment from damommy

Exceptional

Ohmigosh! I worked so hard helping her to get that bolt undone, and now you make me wait to see what's there. The tension was very strong in this part of her trying to get someone's attention. Yes, she should have written the message first. I hope the Power That Be don't punish her for her outburst.

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019

LOL! I just knew someone was helping her, and it was you! LOL. I had to finish it there, Yvonne, it's Sunday, and I couldn't upset everyone, could I? LOL!!! Thank you so very much for the lovely six stars and fabulous. The Powers were listening, we'll be hearing from them soon. :)) As for the message writing, yes, Veronica should have seen that coming. She did her best to hide it while taking it to the table, and then ruined it! She just didn't listen to me! Thanks again, my friend. Big hugs, Sandra xxxx

Comment from aryr

Excellent

Another great chapter Sandra. Veronica proved her frustration and then some. It was a nice touch for her to find the doors bolted and that with some work she could release the bolts. What a shame that she frightened off the workers with her antics, it could have saved precious time, but it added a great level of mystery and suspense. I was constantly asking myself if she would indeed be on time to save not only Mildred but the patients and staff. You did a great job presenting details and descriptions. Well done my friend, hugs and smiles. By the way, how is Eric doing?

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 Comment Written 10-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019

Thank you, Alie, for this fabulous review! Veronica is just so angry at being delayed at every turn, and then getting it wrong herself. I think I would most definitely have thrown a tantrum, but Veronica is far more able to see reason at the last minute than I ever am. lol. I'm so glad you are still enjoying my book. Big hugs back, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

Eric is coming along slowly. He is like Veronica, gets so frustrated when he can't do what he wants, but in his case, not being able to just get stuck into reading. It will take time, but I know he will get there, and I've already told him I'm going to write more adventures for him. It was amazing seeing the look on his face when he unwrapped his book at Christmas. His expression at seeing a picture on himself on the cover underneath the spaceship, brought tears to my eyes. It was so worth the effort. :)) Thank you for asking. I'll be starting his next adventure when this book is nicely tucked up. :)) xx

reply by aryr on 10-Feb-2019

You are so very welcome Sandra. I am so glad Eric is doing well.

Comment from ajay53

Excellent

Wow. I hadn't seen your work before this, but I found myself sitting on the edge of
my seat wondering whether I caught the gist of the chapter, that you were sent back in time to save some people. Well written. Fascinating read. I will look for your books!

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019

Thank you so very much, Ajay53, what a lovely review, I do appreciate it so much! Thank you. :)) Sandra xx

Comment from kiwijenny

Exceptional

I love the frantic panic you express so well. How frustrating it must be not to be able to communicate . Note to self if I ever become a ghost... write the message first so people don't freak out seeing chalk flying around. It's like the book of Daniel..Mene Mene...
God bless

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019

Thank you so very much, Jenny, for the lovely six stars and fabulous review!! I love the 'note to self' lol! And the reference to the book of Daniel, that was wonderful! Thank you, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

reply by kiwijenny on 10-Feb-2019

You are very welcome