Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I loved the warm sentiments here Yvette, albeit filled also with grief and loss, such a yearning I have known, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018

Thanx for the read and review, Dolly! :) You know, I wrote this one on a rainy day when I already had 'the blues' ... not a broken heart, just the occasional 'female thang' (seems no matter how old we get, the hormones still catch up to us once in a while!! lol) ... but it made the mood and word choice more 'straight forward'. :) ;) :) Thanx, as always, for dropping by and be sure to have great remainder of the week filled with adventures of the heart or of the mind (or both!!)! :) :) Yvette :)

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

Hi there Yvette.
This is a great poem and excellent entry for the minute competition.
It is also very poignant. I wish you lots of luck in the contest. Best wishes. Jen.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018

Thanx for the read and review, Jen -- always appreciate your stopping by! :) Have a great remainder of the week! :) :) Yvette

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Minute poem. When we miss someone special by our side, we seek him/her in everything we do. We feel their presence in the warmth of the sun, but we wish they will rather come back soon.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018

Thanx for the read and review, Sandra! :) You know, I wrote this one on a rainy day when I already had 'the blues' ... not a broken heart, just the occasional 'female thang' (seems no matter how old we get, the hormones still catch up to us once in a while!! lol) ... but it made the mood and word choice more 'straight forward'. :) ;) :) Thanx, as always, for dropping by and be sure to have great remainder of the week filled with adventures of the heart or of the mind (or both!!)! :) :) Yvette :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

I'm sorry Yvette, I completely missed the message of this, still a great work. What a highly pragmatic and brilliant way of explaining the physical application of that most elusive of all love, that between a man and a woman, but then again, it could be other forms. I guess that's the froth and bubble application, whereas the Jesus application is a far more practical and unconditional form, free of an emotional necessity. Much more reliable. Well done Yvette, great work, articulate and wise, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018

Wow, Roy! Thank you so very much for these wonderful comments and for the six shining stars! You know, I wrote this one on a rainy day when I already had 'the blues' ... not a broken heart, just the occasional 'female thang' (seems no matter how old we get, the hormones still catch up to us once in a while!! lol) ... but it made the mood and word choice more 'straight forward'. :) ;) :) Thanx, as always, for dropping by and be sure to have great remainder of the week filled with adventures of the heart or of the mind (or both!!)! :) :) Yvette :)

reply by royowen on 17-Oct-2018

Well done, who knows the ways of the heart.

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

NICE WORK UP AND PRESENTATION FOR YOUR POEM MEMORIES OF MISSING SOMEONE IS SAD. SORRY FOR THE CAPS EYES BOTHERING ME AGAIN.

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 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018

Thank you so much for your review, Country Ranch -- I do hope your eyes get to feeling better soon! :) :) Appreciate the beautiful stars, ma'am! :) :)

reply by country ranch writer on 17-Oct-2018

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