Comment from JDRBAR

Exceptional

huger-strike, (and missing word before hunger)

Great chapter my friend. Need I say more? LOL Facing Charles will be for Gladys as it for me facing my father when I was younger. I could feel her insides shriveling up in fear wanting to go anywhere but home.

Finally won a contest but there were only two entrees so pay out was minimal.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018

Thank you so much, Diane, for the lovely 6 stars and for the fabulous, helpful review. I'm made those corrections now. Goodness me, I've made a few in this part. It teaches me not to post at night when I'm too tired to really read through and catch those nits. I'm grateful that you spotted them. I'm glad you enjoyed the story, though, thank you, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from His Grayness

Exceptional

I found this to be really excellent writing with very powerful grip on the reader from the very outset! I did not find anything that would need any kind of adjustment or repair and I want to thank this author for a truly excellent work that I enjoyed very much from start to finish! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018

Thank you so very much, Vance, for all those lovely stars and the fabulous review. I really appreciated your comments, they are so encouraging. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

reply by His Grayness on 17-Oct-2018

All thanks belong to you,for my delight! HIS GRAYNESS; VANCE

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I must admit I found myself concerned for Gladys, she would have been safer in prison, than being confronted by Charles, considering also the court bit. But then Mildred is in worse Doo Doo. But then after all this, they find themselves back in 1996, great story, Sandra, well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : By (a) male prison officer. 2: if you go on a hu(n)ger-strike.3:,he spun on his (heal) heel?

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018

Thank you so very much, Roy!! How on earth did I miss that lot! :( Thank you for pointing them out to me, especially 'heal' Oh Lordy! I've made all the corrections, and I'm so grateful to you for that. Gladys is in a bit of trouble, as were many wives at that time. We will see what happens soon. Thank you again, my friend. Big hugs Sandra xxx

reply by royowen on 16-Oct-2018

Most welcome Sandra,

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This was an informative chapter, Sandra. It I packed with action and dialogue and intrigue. You did a great job with the prison scenes. Readers can feel the tension and emotion of the women. Thanks for sharing. Jan


My main concern is Charles knows was arrested (word left out--maybe--she)

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 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018

Thank you so much, Jan! I've made the correction, thank you for letting me know. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx

Comment from Miranda Langston

Excellent

congratulations on one of your novel's being published :) this is an excellent read and a really captivating chapter. i look forward to reading the next one :)

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 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018

Thank you, Miranda, for your congrats! I have two of the three published now, and have to get this one out for next year. I'm glad you have enjoyed this part, and look forward to having more of your reviews. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx