Comment from brenda bickers

Excellent

Oh Mikey,
I can be your mummy if you like but no breast feeding. lol
This is really sweet. Poor you. How old where you when you were alone. this is so sad. This is such a sweet poem.
Brenda:))x

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 Comment Written 18-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2016

You'd make a wonderful mummy. Of course, I'd be willing to discuss an alternative diet, no problem. LOL
Oh, I never met my dad and my mom was nutty as a loon. But, it didn't really bother me. It was all normal to me, mummy.
Thanks very much. mikey, xxoo

reply by brenda bickers on 20-Jun-2016

Of course you do realise son that you will be disinherited if you do not review my writing. lol As for the other comment all things considered once you have had your teeth pulled.

Brenda:))x Mummy.

reply by the author on 20-Jun-2016

Can I use a dentist, or are you expecting I just get a pair of pliers to show my commitment?

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Now I know...Irish elf...that tells it all.
I know it is hard for a girl to grow without a father image, it has to be double for a boy. You stressed it perfectly in a complete minute poem

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 Comment Written 18-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2016

I'm not actually aware if it was hard because I don't know anything else. :))
It was all normal for me, so it really didn't bother me. Most people find that strange. I find it strange that it did bother them. LOL Thanks so much, mikey