A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "A Love So Dear"Assorted poems of love
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Comment from Irish Goat
A very touching, beautiful and well-written piece. I agree with your biographical statement, Your heart is evident is your writing. Great job, and a wonderful presentation all the way around.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2015
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A very touching, beautiful and well-written piece. I agree with your biographical statement, Your heart is evident is your writing. Great job, and a wonderful presentation all the way around.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2015
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Oh, thank you so much, IG for this splendid review of my humble piece. Know that i am smiling :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello :)
Beautiful poem about a special friendship. Having friends is so important to be happy. Good free verse form with a stunning presentation. Well chosen words. Good job!
Gypsy
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2015
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Hello :)
Beautiful poem about a special friendship. Having friends is so important to be happy. Good free verse form with a stunning presentation. Well chosen words. Good job!
Gypsy
Comment Written 03-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2015
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Hi there, G!
Thanks for stoppin by and leaving me this lovely review :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from Cass Carlton
There is one line in this poem which touches me deeply. "For lighting a candle in the darkness of your existence" A favourite expression of mine is "Why curse the dark when you can light a candle?" It is truly a lovely poem , filled with positive thoughts and hopes of a happy future with new found love. However I would like to offer a suggestion.. The two lines where the mentioned line is the second one. Starts with "how do you" and ends with " of your existence" Got it? Right! Now then, rewrite the lines using "I" "My" and "My" instead of the pronouns you have written .I think the impact is closer, and more personal. What say you?
Other than that Beeutiful. Well done cheers Cass
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2015
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There is one line in this poem which touches me deeply. "For lighting a candle in the darkness of your existence" A favourite expression of mine is "Why curse the dark when you can light a candle?" It is truly a lovely poem , filled with positive thoughts and hopes of a happy future with new found love. However I would like to offer a suggestion.. The two lines where the mentioned line is the second one. Starts with "how do you" and ends with " of your existence" Got it? Right! Now then, rewrite the lines using "I" "My" and "My" instead of the pronouns you have written .I think the impact is closer, and more personal. What say you?
Other than that Beeutiful. Well done cheers Cass
Comment Written 03-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2015
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Done and done!! Thank you so much for your wonderful suggestion.
Know that I am smiling now :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful poem you have penned. Your whole heart was in this piece. I wish I could write a poem as beautiful as this. In your picture you do not look old enough to have children and grandchildren. As I was reading this I loved where you said (Here are those expressions
You are loved
Your light in my life will never dull
Never go out
Reminded me of my husband of 28 years. Great job my friend. Hugs, Teri
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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2015
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This is a very beautiful poem you have penned. Your whole heart was in this piece. I wish I could write a poem as beautiful as this. In your picture you do not look old enough to have children and grandchildren. As I was reading this I loved where you said (Here are those expressions
You are loved
Your light in my life will never dull
Never go out
Reminded me of my husband of 28 years. Great job my friend. Hugs, Teri
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Comment Written 03-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2015
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, Teri!
I also want to thank you for the lovely compliment :) 62...lol, is my age.
Always justafan,
Missy
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Missy, I am 59 and you look a lot younger than I do. You are so pretty. Hugs, Teri
Comment from patcelaw
I love the words of this poem. They are so true. When you find someone who will hold you in his arms, and whisper I love you keep him close. I kept my husband close as he accepted me when others had given up on me. My husband was the wing beneath my wings and I miss the wind of his love for me.
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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2015
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I love the words of this poem. They are so true. When you find someone who will hold you in his arms, and whisper I love you keep him close. I kept my husband close as he accepted me when others had given up on me. My husband was the wing beneath my wings and I miss the wind of his love for me.
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Comment Written 03-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2015
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I agree, Patricia. Sometimes it is hard to get the words out and others ...like this. It just flowed.
For once, a picture or artwork did not produce the words. Feelings did!
Thank you, sweet lady :)
Missy