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bhogg
Mango eyes and (mango's)
A cute story with a moral. Driving with dialog like you did will keep your readers engaged. Bill
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2015
Bill, I appreciate the correction and that you took the time to read my story. John