Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Ok this one had me thinking for a bit:) Fits the contest perfectly and I thought you grabbed me with strong descriptive words, and a twisted message of something...
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Happy holidays,
Maureen

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

The "no juice in her tank" metaphor: she had a brain but nothing to fire it up! Most people stumbled there, too obscure, great review, Maureen,

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

An amusing and appropriate nonsense poem for the contest. Good accompanying picture. Hope you do well in the contest - good luck. Season's Greetings and Best wishes for the New Year Dorothy x

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Thanks Dorothy for the great review, comments and well wishes

Comment from padumachitta

Excellent

Hi...the picture was so funny i almost forgot to read the poem:-)...it made me chuckle even more.
well done, good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2014

Thank you for the great review and appreciated comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from flamingstar

Excellent

Ah, how cute! Is that Raggedy Ann impersonating Miss Muppet?? I've never tried one of these. Love the "in her tank there's no juice" line!!

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2014

Thanks for the really great review, merry Christmas, blessings, Roy.

Comment from JJ Rowe

Excellent

I'm a fan of nonsense poems! I have no idea what you said but you convinced me ha! Nice job here! Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2014

Thank you so much for the great review and comments, merry Christmas and blessings, Roy.

Comment from yachtworknz

Excellent

I was all into this till the last line.



Oh, our darling Miss Muppet
thinking she was a puppet
plainly needs glasses to see;
Even you will deduce
in her tank there's no juice
Oh boy! How wrong can you be.

That left me wondering, but I am a man.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2014

Thank you so much for the great review and comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

LOL - It's silly and funny and reads like a dream (great rhyming and cadence :-)

Best of luck in the voting booth :-)

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2014

Thanks so much for the great review and support throughout 2014, I appreciate it, blessings, Roy.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Congratulations, you nailed it. However, your nonsense in a strange and unexpected way, makes a lot of sense. That is when you consider the illustration.
What is different about this picture. "I am blonde, beautiful and perfect. You are ugly, raggedy and red headed. You cannot be my biologocal parents. Can you?" LOL.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2014

Heh, heh, thanks for the great review and clever comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Absolutely love this submission for the funny nonsense competition, loving your verse which flows like an excellent limerick, good luck in the contest my friend.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2014

Thanks Eric, for the great review, and your beaut support over 2014. I really appreciate it, merry Christmas and a happy new year to you and yours, blessings, Roy,

reply by Eric1 on 28-Dec-2014

You are most Welcome Roy, unfortunately been ill all over Xmas hence the late reply

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, mystery writer, I enjoyed reading this one. the picture is adorable and I like the joke the girl couldn't see that she claimed dolls as her parents, lol good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Thank SW, for these great words and review,