Comment from A Matter Of Words

Exceptional

Powerful writing...I was holding my breath while reading the supernatural encounter. Outstanding. This issue of the church turning a blind eye to the evil within is very relevant, which provides Cephi Moon a strong foothold in modern story writing. I was riveted.

 Comment Written 31-May-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014

Thank you so much, Stephanie. Being Catholic myself, I feel the church handled those events abysmally. Our new pope, however, seems determined to make amends all around.

I very much appreciate your encouragement, support and generosity!

:) Bev

reply by A Matter Of Words on 01-Jun-2014

I don't think it is something the church could ignore any longer. Yours us a fascinating tail, Bev. I truly enjoy reading it.

reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014

Thanks again, Stephanie. Their actions caused a lot of young Catholics - even older ones - to be become discouraged. The ripple effects are still being felt around the world.

:) Bev

Comment from chasennov

Excellent

"Cephi Moon, Part Two" Another excellent chapter you have created here in your ongoing saga 'Along The Jericho Road.' I have been following this story religiously for a while now. Well done.

 Comment Written 31-May-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014

Thank you so much, Chasennov. I do very much appreciate your loyal following of my novel as well as your encouragement, here. :) Bev

reply by chasennov on 01-Jun-2014

You are most welcome always, Bev.

reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014

:))

Comment from indigo ivana

Excellent

What a well written short story. Kept me wanting to read more. Wanting to be sure punishment was swift and great loving the use of the higher 00p

 Comment Written 31-May-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014

Thank you so much, Indigo. I much appreciate you taking time to read my chapter. Your encouragement is most helpful! :) Bev

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

MYYSTERIOUS HAPPENINGS GOING ON WITH THE SWORD, AND THE CAR IS IT SHARMAN MAGIC THAT DONE THIS? THEY SEEM TO BE IN A LOT OF TROUBLE RIGHT NOW

 Comment Written 31-May-2014

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reply by the author on 31-May-2014

Thanks for stopping by to read my story, CRW. My story includes both the traditional and Native religious beliefs. Warm regards, Bev

Comment from kleck140

Excellent

Very interesting. I printed it out so I can read it
again. I hope to be as good at writing as you are
here. Your dialogue and descriptions are a must
learn for me. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 31-May-2014

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reply by the author on 31-May-2014

I am really honored by our kind and generous review, k. Thank you so much for taking time on a Saturday night to read my chapter. Much appreciated! :) Bev

reply by kleck140 on 31-May-2014

Thanks for your quick reply!

reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014

You bet! Have a good week...

:) Bev

Comment from winespiller

Excellent

You are very good at this type of writing! If you keep the pace fast enough it's easy to get into the story. especially a tale as provocative as this on is.

 Comment Written 31-May-2014

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reply by the author on 31-May-2014

Hi, winespiller. Thank you so much for this very encouraging review. I much appreciate your kind words and generosity. :) Bev

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

"A last-minute "I'm sorry", [You can't have double quotes inside double quotes. Either put "I'm sorry" in single quotes,or, as I would do, italicize it.]

" and the gates of heaven open? That's very generous of you, Father. [no space before and... also, close quote after "Father."
cranked the car's heater up then bliew on his hands [misspell]

"Stopping in mid-air, it began to spin." Bev, the description following this is superb: the magic of it is compelling.

 Comment Written 31-May-2014

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reply by the author on 31-May-2014

Thanks for the good suggestions, Jay. I appreciate the support!

:) Bev

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Loved the Paranormal introduction that answered earlier questions. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.

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 Comment Written 31-May-2014

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reply by the author on 31-May-2014

Thanks much for the review, Charlie. I appreciate the support. :) Bev

reply by c_lucas on 31-May-2014

You're welcome, Bev. Charlie

reply by the author on 31-May-2014

:)