Along the Jericho Road
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Comment from judiverse
Great work with showing Jana's feelings as they search for clues among Edward Pearce's belongings. It's a painful moment for Jana as she thinks of the suffering her uncle. They are certainly finding things that will wrap up the case against Edward, but what about the force that is driving him? I like the way you show Jana rebounding from her personal feelings to focus on the case. What an exciting conclusion to this post. The bad guy has kidnapped Tony and wants Father Brian in exchange. What a problem for Jana. judi
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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Great work with showing Jana's feelings as they search for clues among Edward Pearce's belongings. It's a painful moment for Jana as she thinks of the suffering her uncle. They are certainly finding things that will wrap up the case against Edward, but what about the force that is driving him? I like the way you show Jana rebounding from her personal feelings to focus on the case. What an exciting conclusion to this post. The bad guy has kidnapped Tony and wants Father Brian in exchange. What a problem for Jana. judi
Comment Written 10-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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Judi, thank you so much for sharing your insights into the chapter. It's always so helpful to get that kind of feedback. Some heavy stuff coming when we face that 'force' you mention. Everyone's going to end up changed as a result. :0) Bev
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You're welcome! Very powerful reading. Sorry I gave out all my 6s already. A terrible situation Jana's facing. judi
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Judi, I am more than happy with five stars. Your support and encouragement have been invaluable to me! Big Hug, Bev
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Hi, Bev. I appreciate that. Most weeks I wish I had more six stars to bestow! judi
Comment from MM lives on :)
Hi Bev, been away from the game a little bit but so happy I jumped in for another vivacious and dramatic chapter in this wonderful CSI tale...Continued means more excitement...right Tony?
BRAVO..WOULD GO INTO MORE DETAIL BUT GOTTA RUN :) LOVED IT HUGS!!!!!
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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Hi Bev, been away from the game a little bit but so happy I jumped in for another vivacious and dramatic chapter in this wonderful CSI tale...Continued means more excitement...right Tony?
BRAVO..WOULD GO INTO MORE DETAIL BUT GOTTA RUN :) LOVED IT HUGS!!!!!
Comment Written 10-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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Hi, Christopher. Thank you so very much for taking time out of your busy life to review so generously. I'm so very honored by your support and encouragement, my friend. Yes, things are going to get very tense from here on out :0) Bev
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:) I SALIVATE FOR IT ...LOL
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You're the best, Christopher.
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is a hard hitting piece of writing from the author in this post. This is a very topical subject matter with the numerous sex scandals that are plaguing the airwaves at the moment. This is an unpleasant subject but one that needs to ne tackled.
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This is a hard hitting piece of writing from the author in this post. This is a very topical subject matter with the numerous sex scandals that are plaguing the airwaves at the moment. This is an unpleasant subject but one that needs to ne tackled.
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Comment Written 10-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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Thank you, Tomes. :0)
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My pleasure
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Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Bev,
Whoo, what a choice Jana has before her - but the two things are connected, so she should be able to make the connection.
Great chapter, terrific tension, and brilliant hook on the end.
Patrick
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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Hi Bev,
Whoo, what a choice Jana has before her - but the two things are connected, so she should be able to make the connection.
Great chapter, terrific tension, and brilliant hook on the end.
Patrick
Comment Written 10-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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Patrick, thank you so very much for this generous and gracious review. I'm honored by your support. :0) Bev
Comment from Green Lake Girl
Another riveting chapter, Bev. You're setting up for a very dramatic scene, which I am already oh-so-eager to read. I really love the interaction between the law enforcement personnel. Each has a very distinct personality, which is the sign of a good writer. Dred looks and sounds like he's swirling around the drain. Excellently penned, Bev.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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Another riveting chapter, Bev. You're setting up for a very dramatic scene, which I am already oh-so-eager to read. I really love the interaction between the law enforcement personnel. Each has a very distinct personality, which is the sign of a good writer. Dred looks and sounds like he's swirling around the drain. Excellently penned, Bev.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much for this great review, Marietta. I like your image of Dred! And I would concur. He's a hotshot which doesn't go down to well in the American heartland. I so appreciate your encouragement and great generosity. Hugs, Bev
Comment from DonandVicki
A nicely constructed con continuation to your novel. Good visuals created with your words and my attention was held throughout the write. Don
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A nicely constructed con continuation to your novel. Good visuals created with your words and my attention was held throughout the write. Don
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Comment Written 10-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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Don, thank you so very much. I appreciate the encouragement and support. :0) Bev
Comment from c_lucas
I have never felt the urge to give more than one sixer. Now, with the raw courage set forth in this chapter, I am going to break my rule. The following is virtual, but you have earned everyone of them.(6,6,6,6---6,6,6+) A very strong chapter and may God have mercy on the killer;s soul, because Jana won't.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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I have never felt the urge to give more than one sixer. Now, with the raw courage set forth in this chapter, I am going to break my rule. The following is virtual, but you have earned everyone of them.(6,6,6,6---6,6,6+) A very strong chapter and may God have mercy on the killer;s soul, because Jana won't.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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Charlie, I'm so very honored. I worked to get this chapter to 'feel' and 'sound' right. What you've written validates those efforts, and I cannot possibly thank you enough! You've made my week.
Warmest regards, Bev
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You're welcome, Bev. Charlie
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Wow this is another really good job of writing. Jana's emotions are extremely well described. You are doing a great job here
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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Wow this is another really good job of writing. Jana's emotions are extremely well described. You are doing a great job here
Comment Written 10-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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Hi, Barbara. Thank you so very much. What an honor coming from a writer I admire. I really appreciate the support, generosity and encouragement.
:0) Bev