Heaven's Raven- Ode to Death
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Comment from adewpearl
good use of enjambment to keep thoughts flowing from line to line
pervade/descend/wither - strong verb choices add to the drama of your poem
good alliteration in deadly dance
and in suffuses with sooty vaporous venom
your moves encloses - moves enclose
a most thoughtful poem in praise of death, which often brings a soul sweet relief :-) Brooke
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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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good use of enjambment to keep thoughts flowing from line to line
pervade/descend/wither - strong verb choices add to the drama of your poem
good alliteration in deadly dance
and in suffuses with sooty vaporous venom
your moves encloses - moves enclose
a most thoughtful poem in praise of death, which often brings a soul sweet relief :-) Brooke
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Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Thank you, Brooke, for this lovely review! :)
I am pleased you liked it. I have made slight changes now.
Have a great day! :)
Comment from ProjectBluebook
An excellent read, real spooky but I liked it. Lots of quatrains with unusual words. Different is a good approach, good in Fan story. Italics is becoming ... color delightful. I see an abundance of writing potential in your quill. The pen is mightier than the sword, my friend. I savor your words like bitter sweet honey dripping from a honey comb. hallowed heaven ... i admire lots of phrases I like. good luck, my friend in Fan story. wackydo
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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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An excellent read, real spooky but I liked it. Lots of quatrains with unusual words. Different is a good approach, good in Fan story. Italics is becoming ... color delightful. I see an abundance of writing potential in your quill. The pen is mightier than the sword, my friend. I savor your words like bitter sweet honey dripping from a honey comb. hallowed heaven ... i admire lots of phrases I like. good luck, my friend in Fan story. wackydo
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Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, Wackydo, for this lovely review. I am pleased you enjoyed this.
Have a great day!
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Anytime!!!
