Comment from Black_Oxygen

Excellent

This poetry tugs at the heart. So many confuse: "Til Death
Do Us Part" with "Til Murder Do Us Part". In my opinion,
I think that low self image and esteem are a big slice of
this unfortunate pie. This poetry is well written and
important. Thank You for your creation.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013

That's pretty much what Dr. Phil said. I just hope she comes to her senses in time. Many thanks for the review.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

A dark, sad and raw feeling of love and emotion of dark aspect of love of husband is simply exposed, so helpless is wife at every moment of living, a mindless or heartless love imagery is created, nice. 02/901

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013

Yes, it was sad. The family had dragged her to Dr. Phil to try and talk some sense into her. She wouldn't listen. Many thanks for reviewing.

Comment from vapros

Excellent

Well constructed - this tale of the good hearted woman in love with a drunken and abusive man. It's quite true and not at all rare. 'This man's love is a poisonous thing' says it all. Be well.

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 Comment Written 01-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013

It's sad when women fall for someone like that. Everyone deserves to be treated with respect. Many thanks for the review.