Comment from juliedickson55

Excellent

Very clever, and a good graphic to compliment this silly story in poetic form!

Thanks for sharing this funny poem- I enjoyed reading it.
No fault to be found for laughter abounds!

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2012

Thanks for your kind review and have a lovely day, Ine

Comment from poesyapprentice

Excellent

I am giving you a five because even tho I can't do these types of poems yours fit the contest bill and it isn't your fault I am a no nonsense kind of girl. Wishing you the best in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2012

Thanks for your kind review and have a lovely day, Ine.TY for best wishes.

Comment from ernesto escarro

Excellent

No horse shit for Granny

Based on thought that apples produced, apes
your Granny you think is not monkey, not monks nor donkey.
And you conclude mankind has plenty of mind.
This is being played. And it make you proud because she won.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2012

Thanks for your kind review and have a lovely day, Ine

reply by ernesto escarro on 22-Aug-2012

Thanks for sharing.

Comment from kra-z-ka-z

Excellent

OK this made absolutely no sense at all! Ok maybe a tad bit but for the life of me I can't remember where! For something so wrongly put together, it was just alright!

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2012

Thanks for your kind review and have a lovely day, Ine

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

I like the stream of consciousness nature of this rhyming poem and the way it segues from one topic to the next - a good response to the prompt's request for nonsense :-)
I like the seeds/Eve proximate rhyme
and the granny/grammy pairing too :-)
Good luck in the contest. Brooke

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2012

Thanks for your kind review and have a lovely day, Ine. TY for best wishes. Don't really like writing nonsense-LOL.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

This is a silly- dilly for sure
This is what Icall a food for thought poem....Meaning after you read it you go Hmmmm.
Thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 22-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2012

Thanks for your kind review and have a lovely day, Ine

reply by misscookie on 22-Aug-2012

Tats so title, my friend
Your very welcome. you to.

Comment from Melspoems

Excellent

Lol, it's rhyming and it's nonsense!! So you did well there.
It's funny too as bits make sense and then it goes off somewhere else. :-)
Best of luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 22-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2012

Thanks for your kind review and have a lovely day, Ine. Thanks for best wishes Mel.