Things past
Rambling thoughts while in the grips of a headache37 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Wow, I am impressed. When I have my migranes, it hurts to even think, let alone come up with these sort of imaginary thoughts. This is very well written.
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Wow, I am impressed. When I have my migranes, it hurts to even think, let alone come up with these sort of imaginary thoughts. This is very well written.
Comment Written 24-May-2010
Comment from Shirley McLain
Very good story, well written. Your dream tour service is a wonderful idea. Sign me up:) You put very vivid detail into your writing and it brought pictures to my mind. I did not find any spag. Good job.
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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Very good story, well written. Your dream tour service is a wonderful idea. Sign me up:) You put very vivid detail into your writing and it brought pictures to my mind. I did not find any spag. Good job.
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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thank you so much , I totaly appreciate you comme
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Comment from amada
This is really good. I like the notion of a Dream Travel Agency with baggages holding only memories. You opened my imagination! I would like to make a reservation.
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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This is really good. I like the notion of a Dream Travel Agency with baggages holding only memories. You opened my imagination! I would like to make a reservation.
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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thanks amada, they say that if you can imagine it then it's real...
so hop on :)
Adina
Comment from jl & bandit
Hello apelle,
Wow this is cool, I would book a trip, you know, to rid my mind of a few unwanted junk files...lol.
Very creative!
Best to you in the vote!
JL&B
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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Hello apelle,
Wow this is cool, I would book a trip, you know, to rid my mind of a few unwanted junk files...lol.
Very creative!
Best to you in the vote!
JL&B
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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thanks so much JL & B, i am happy you liked my rambling
Adina
Comment from words
Another beautifully done short story.
Loved the idea of the tour bus. That would make a wonderful extended story.
Great ending:
Not only old people think the past is everything and not only young people believe in the future and nobody can live like a stubborn wild horse only in the present.
Beautiful metaphor.
Wish I had a six left... it would be yours!!!
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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Another beautifully done short story.
Loved the idea of the tour bus. That would make a wonderful extended story.
Great ending:
Not only old people think the past is everything and not only young people believe in the future and nobody can live like a stubborn wild horse only in the present.
Beautiful metaphor.
Wish I had a six left... it would be yours!!!
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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aww, words, I don't care about the rating, your alone made my day :)
thank you so much
Adina
Comment from Scornwell
A nice thought provoking read that caused my mind to wander. It flows nicely and reads almost like a poem while conjuring vivid imagery. If there were any errors I didn't see them. Good job.
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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A nice thought provoking read that caused my mind to wander. It flows nicely and reads almost like a poem while conjuring vivid imagery. If there were any errors I didn't see them. Good job.
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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thanks so much Scornwell
Adina
Comment from marcellawachtel
An imaginary romp into fantasy, with memories as baggage. This is so well done, and so convincing a voyage that I long for a ticket, too. Wonderful images, and the poem winds up perfectly.
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reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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An imaginary romp into fantasy, with memories as baggage. This is so well done, and so convincing a voyage that I long for a ticket, too. Wonderful images, and the poem winds up perfectly.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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thanks so much for your wonderful comment
Adina
