Crimson streams
A poem33 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
It is very true that the word of God is like a sword. It can cut through your thoughts and made you understand your need of a savior. I appreciate so much. You're sharing this with us. Have a good day and God bless. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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It is very true that the word of God is like a sword. It can cut through your thoughts and made you understand your need of a savior. I appreciate so much. You're sharing this with us. Have a good day and God bless. Patricia.
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Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Thanks Pat, for these most encouraging comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from jacquelyn popp
Your poem is a powerful reflection of the struggle between the sword, and the pen's ability to outlast the might of weapons. Your imagery is vivid, and contrasts the fleeting victories of war with the power of your words.
The rhyming in your poem flows smoothly that helps to reinforce the weight of each idea. The poem feels both classical and personal, blending historical reflection with a personal calling. Well done.
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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Your poem is a powerful reflection of the struggle between the sword, and the pen's ability to outlast the might of weapons. Your imagery is vivid, and contrasts the fleeting victories of war with the power of your words.
The rhyming in your poem flows smoothly that helps to reinforce the weight of each idea. The poem feels both classical and personal, blending historical reflection with a personal calling. Well done.
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Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Thanks Jacquelyn, for these most encouraging comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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you are very welcome. I always enjoy reading anything that you write. And thank you for the nomination for reviewer of the month, it is much appreciated.
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Most welcome, well earned
Comment from Gina Schneller
Very creative and very deep. Times pen really has written life and death. In truth and poetically. I enjoyed reading your poem very much. Thank you for sharing it with us all. Best of luck with all your writing.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Very creative and very deep. Times pen really has written life and death. In truth and poetically. I enjoyed reading your poem very much. Thank you for sharing it with us all. Best of luck with all your writing.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Thanks Gina, for these most encouraging comments and a great review, blessings Roy
