A Serendipitous Meeting
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Comment from BethShelby
I enjoyed reading this but I'm a bit behind and need to read back and catch up. The previous chapters' recaps and each character's description helps, but I'll read more of what I missed. Tyler sounds like a very nice person.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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I enjoyed reading this but I'm a bit behind and need to read back and catch up. The previous chapters' recaps and each character's description helps, but I'll read more of what I missed. Tyler sounds like a very nice person.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Not a problem. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Rebeka had struck gold in as much as she met Tyler and he had a friend who is a great lawler, and a friend who is a doctor. And she also has Amber!!! Lol, I think most of us have a friend like her, I know I have. I really enjoyed this part, especially when Ty offered Rebeka the chance to hear her baby's heartbeat. That was really nice. Well done, my friend. Love and hugs, Sandra. xxx
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Rebeka had struck gold in as much as she met Tyler and he had a friend who is a great lawler, and a friend who is a doctor. And she also has Amber!!! Lol, I think most of us have a friend like her, I know I have. I really enjoyed this part, especially when Ty offered Rebeka the chance to hear her baby's heartbeat. That was really nice. Well done, my friend. Love and hugs, Sandra. xxx
Comment Written 02-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the understanding and the kind review.
Comment from lancellot
You're doing a good job widening the circle of characters, adding a bit more information and showcasing, so far, a group of kindhearted and good caring people. Now, how to justify the weather and roads being closed to keep her there over days is something else.
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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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You're doing a good job widening the circle of characters, adding a bit more information and showcasing, so far, a group of kindhearted and good caring people. Now, how to justify the weather and roads being closed to keep her there over days is something else.
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Comment Written 02-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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The roads open up on Wednesday. Texas isn't like Chicago. They have no equipment to clean up snow and ice. Really they don't, They don't get upset over a Cat 3 hurricane heading their way, but will close schools for days, with a possibly of snow. For real. It's amazing. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jim vecchio
Very good continuation of your story. Rebeka is a refreshing break from vindictive, revenge-seeking heroines. Dr. Tyler is a refreshing break from men who would stop at nothing to take advantage of women. All your work is above-average.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Very good continuation of your story. Rebeka is a refreshing break from vindictive, revenge-seeking heroines. Dr. Tyler is a refreshing break from men who would stop at nothing to take advantage of women. All your work is above-average.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the kind review and understanding.
