A Serendipitous Meeting
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Comment from jim vecchio
Well, a lot happened in this chapter and we know a lot more about Rebeka and the type of person Tyler is. I hope Richard gets his comeuppance. It will be interesting to see any effect this may have on Rebekah's father.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2025
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Well, a lot happened in this chapter and we know a lot more about Rebeka and the type of person Tyler is. I hope Richard gets his comeuppance. It will be interesting to see any effect this may have on Rebekah's father.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2025
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Thank you for the kind review. Rebeka's father is a piece of work.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Ty's not going to be impressed with Amber, and I don't think Rebeka is either. She has been brought up in a strict environment, with her father and school. And what an absolute monster Richard is! He won't want to know, not if he has a glamorous girlfriend. And to take her money? He needs arresting more than anything else. Let's hope that Roger can help. Great start to the second chapter, Barbara. Well done! Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2025
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Ty's not going to be impressed with Amber, and I don't think Rebeka is either. She has been brought up in a strict environment, with her father and school. And what an absolute monster Richard is! He won't want to know, not if he has a glamorous girlfriend. And to take her money? He needs arresting more than anything else. Let's hope that Roger can help. Great start to the second chapter, Barbara. Well done! Sandra xxx
Comment Written 23-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2025
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Thank you for the kind review. Richard is an all-around bad guy. More will be told about him later.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed how natural your dialogue feels - it pulls me right into the moment! I love how you slowly show us Rebeka's past. I was eager to learn more. That ending with Amber's comments was perfect. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2025
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I really enjoyed how natural your dialogue feels - it pulls me right into the moment! I love how you slowly show us Rebeka's past. I was eager to learn more. That ending with Amber's comments was perfect. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Comment Written 23-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2025
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Thank you for the encouragement.
