A Serendipitous Meeting
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm liking this story, Barbara, they all sound nice. Aunt Beth and Lily, it's nice to have a child in the story. I'm sure she will try to become a match-maker for her Uncle Tyler and for Rebeka. They generally do. Then take the credit when it happens. Well done, my friend. Great chapter. Sandra xx
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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I'm liking this story, Barbara, they all sound nice. Aunt Beth and Lily, it's nice to have a child in the story. I'm sure she will try to become a match-maker for her Uncle Tyler and for Rebeka. They generally do. Then take the credit when it happens. Well done, my friend. Great chapter. Sandra xx
Comment Written 16-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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Thank you for the kind review. Lily is a character, but I'm not sure she's a true matchmaker.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Another strong chapter. It flows so well. I like following the relationship between Tyler and Rebeka. The storm adds tension! I felt a sense of isolation reading this. This was another strong chapter. I look forward to reading more!
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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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Another strong chapter. It flows so well. I like following the relationship between Tyler and Rebeka. The storm adds tension! I felt a sense of isolation reading this. This was another strong chapter. I look forward to reading more!
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Comment Written 16-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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Thank you for the encouragement.
