Comment from Pearl Edwards

Exceptional

The title line - I saw a people marching-
being repeated through these verses makes this poem all the more emotional and dramatic, Roy. Well done,
Cheers
Valda

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2025

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025

Thanks Valda for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

I enjoyed this, with a big vision of God's own people walking or marching together towards heaven, single-minded and unified in heart and spirit. Beautiful poem, and the repeating first line was effective.
Wendy

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2025

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025

Thanks Wendy, for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

The people marching towards our Lord and salvation. It looks a little bit like the magis road.Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings this is a very beautiful poem.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2025

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025

Thanks Iza, for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

A beautiful poem of faith with perfect meter and strong rhyme.
God is with us always and those who march along with Him are truly blessed.
Nancy

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2025

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025

Thanks Nancy, for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from ESOSTINE

Excellent

Thanks so much, dear Roy for sharing this visionary piece of the march on the saints guided by our Saviour, Jesus Christ, singing in one accord, praising God in His holy aboard. Very inspiring, a work that sent my soul into a world of introspection. Well done, dear Roy

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2025

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025

Thanks for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from Karen Cherry

Exceptional

This was just lovely . It made me a bit weepy. The sheer magnificence of it. It should be published. It should be shared. Love to you and yours. I am back to writing my Common Sense poems again. Look at number 12. Karen

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2025

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025

Thanks for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy

reply by Karen Cherry on 17-Feb-2025

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Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Your poem is so uplifting! The way you wrote it makes it feel like a march itself. I love how you paint the faith of these people. The line "Their God marched by their side" gave me chills, Such a strong image! Your poem is filled with inspiration. Truly wonderful!

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2025

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025

Thanks Michael, for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from Carol Clark2

Exceptional

This poem describes a lovely vision of God's people from around the world, united in purpose and led by God. The meter emphasizes the feeling of the march, and the repetition drives home the vision. The rhyme is effective throughout. Well done! Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2025

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025

Thanks Carol, for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy

reply by Carol Clark2 on 22-Feb-2025

My pleasure. Sorry for the delay in responding. I'm at my sister's, helping out while she recovers from surgery. Have a blessed weekend. Carol

reply by the author on 22-Feb-2025

Healing and prayers for your dear sister

reply by Carol Clark2 on 22-Feb-2025

Thank you, Roy. I appreciate that.

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

I have missed seeing your writings. I loved the repitition of the words, "I saw a people marching." It sends a strong message. In this day and age when the entire world seems to be falling apart and people seem so seperate, we can be at peace knowing that His people will never be seperated and we will march together toward eternity. thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 09-Feb-2025

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025

Thanks Marilyn, for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

When we know the Lord is our Savior we know that there is no agreement between light and darkness. If we have the light in us, then the darkness will disappear. Thank you for your poem.

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 Comment Written 09-Feb-2025

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025

Thanks Pat, for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy