Sweetie Pie
A quatern for a little girl (like my granddaughter)39 total reviews
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading this poem. It is uplifting and cheery, which is needed at this time. The picture surely portrays a sweetie pie. Well written. I'm still smiling.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
I enjoyed reading this poem. It is uplifting and cheery, which is needed at this time. The picture surely portrays a sweetie pie. Well written. I'm still smiling.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Hi Brenda, thanks for all the awesome words for my Sweetie Pie poem. Your thoughtfulness means a lot to me. This grandma appreciates all of your kindness
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I knew it was one of your poems!!
Comment from EeanBlack
This is so adorable. This is the cutest little poem. It has to be to get such gushing dribble from a guy. The image is wonderful. I wish all children that carefree attitude, and the love that gave it to them. I'll break from the tough guy attitude for children anytime. This is very good.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
This is so adorable. This is the cutest little poem. It has to be to get such gushing dribble from a guy. The image is wonderful. I wish all children that carefree attitude, and the love that gave it to them. I'll break from the tough guy attitude for children anytime. This is very good.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Hi Eean, thanks for all the awesome words for my Sweetie Pie poem. Your thoughtfulness means a lot to me. This grandma appreciates all of your kindness.
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If you are anything like mine, you deserve it.
Comment from Sanku
It is a very sweet poem totally appealing to a child . The rhymes are delightful and sounds very lilting when reading aloud All the best for the contest..
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
It is a very sweet poem totally appealing to a child . The rhymes are delightful and sounds very lilting when reading aloud All the best for the contest..
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Hi Santha, thanks for all the awesome words for my Sweetie Pie poem. Your thoughtfulness means a lot to me. This grandma appreciates all of your kindness. Thanks for the good wishes in the contest.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
What an adorable picture and equally pleasurable poem. You have written of a wonderful time in the life of a child and mother, a time to live joyously and fully. And you write a great poem with good rhyme and rhythm.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
What an adorable picture and equally pleasurable poem. You have written of a wonderful time in the life of a child and mother, a time to live joyously and fully. And you write a great poem with good rhyme and rhythm.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Hi Carol, thanks for all the awesome words for my Sweetie Pie poem. Your thoughtfulness means a lot to me. This grandma appreciates all of your kindness
Comment from Lana Marie
That's so sweet, I love the picture and the whole presentation. I love the rhyming. This has such a sweet tone to it all. I do wonder how you are able to make the picture and everything nice and wide every time I write something it's so narrow. I do it all on my phone so I don't know if that's the problem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
That's so sweet, I love the picture and the whole presentation. I love the rhyming. This has such a sweet tone to it all. I do wonder how you are able to make the picture and everything nice and wide every time I write something it's so narrow. I do it all on my phone so I don't know if that's the problem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Hi Lana, thanks for all the awesome words for my Sweetie Pie poem. Your thoughtfulness means a lot to me. This grandma appreciates all of your kindness and the good wishes for the contest too.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Rhyming Poem for a Child writing prompt. Smooth meter. Nice rhymes. Cute over-all poem. I love the image you chose for your presentation. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
An excellent entry for the Rhyming Poem for a Child writing prompt. Smooth meter. Nice rhymes. Cute over-all poem. I love the image you chose for your presentation. Nicely done.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Hi Marilyn, thanks for all the awesome words for my Sweetie Pie poem. Your thoughtfulness means a lot to me. This grandma appreciates all of your kindness
Thanks for the wishes for the contest.
Comment from Sally Law
Oh, this is just the sweetest thing! I so needed thiscafter a difficult reviewing day. A breath of fresh air and dose of childlike sweetness. Perfectly metered and beautifully presented. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest.
Sally Law :)) xoxo
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
Oh, this is just the sweetest thing! I so needed thiscafter a difficult reviewing day. A breath of fresh air and dose of childlike sweetness. Perfectly metered and beautifully presented. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest.
Sally Law :)) xoxo
Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Hey Sally, thanks for all the awesome words for my Sweetie Pie poem. Your thoughtfulness means a lot to me. This grandma appreciates all of your kindness.
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You are most welcome, Gramdma! Fingers crossed for you in the contest, my best wishes.
Sally :))
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great rhyming poem for a child. The rhyme scheme is perfect and the poem flows nicely from beginning to end. The picture you chose is adorable.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
This is a great rhyming poem for a child. The rhyme scheme is perfect and the poem flows nicely from beginning to end. The picture you chose is adorable.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
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Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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Hi Cecilia, I can't thank you enough for this very special review and kind words.
My Sweetie Pie and I appreciate it so very much, my dear friend. LOL.
Love, Debi
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You're welcome my friend
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I love this rhyming poem and presentation. It reminded me of calling my daughter Sweetie Pie when she was baby. The rhymes flowed well and children will love to read this.
Best wishes,
Alex
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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
I love this rhyming poem and presentation. It reminded me of calling my daughter Sweetie Pie when she was baby. The rhymes flowed well and children will love to read this.
Best wishes,
Alex
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Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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Hi Sweetie, I think so many of us can relate to that name. I still have a habit of calling special people sweetie.
I can't thank you enough for this very special review and kind words.
My Sweetie Pie and I appreciate it so very much, my dear friend. LOL.
Love, Debi
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Hi Debi! My friend! I went off the grid for a couple days but please be in touch again. I felt overwhelmed by some others. This Sweetie Pie poem is the one I told Chris, if this one wins i won't feel bad. It is such a beautiful poem! I'll be writing you later today. Love, Alex