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The Beginning.

A story about overcoming adversity.

34 total reviews 
Comment from royowen
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What a great story Harry, I was born a redhead, and when one is a little different, you become a target for what is considered 'normal', that's the way humans are, everything but what God wants us to be, I was good at sport most of my life so that overcomes a lot of things, so your grandfather was right, just be better than your competitors. But mind you, that's not right either, loving is a learnt art, most don't do, beautifully written Harry, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
    Well, thank you so much Roy. I truly appreciate your kind review. And yes, you are so right...
reply by royowen on 10-Jan-2025
    Well done Harry
Comment from LJbutterfly
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I enjoyed this very compelling story. Many children have things they are embarrassed about, or can't do, but they give up and never put up a fight for themselves. You were a brave young boy and man, and your grandfather was wise. You story is interesting and inspiring.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
    Well, thank you so much LFbutterfly for that kind review. I really appreciate that!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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OH, if so many more of today's youth would heed and understand your story... they'd rather take such as a reason for 'baby' or 'special' treatment or, better yet, as a reason they should be given special privileges and such or even a 'leg up' over others because of it.... sigh. :( A wonderful story of overcoming obstacles we all must face... well written, sir! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette

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 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
    Well, thank you so much Yvette. I really appreciate your review!
Comment from Begin Again
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At first, your story reminded me of my firstborn, being 19, and having my son somewhere else instead of with me. We, too, were in the Air Force in Amarillo, Texas, and later at McConnel AFB in Kansas. But when you got to the saying, "Can't could never do anything" my life with my father kicked in.... I've gone through a lot of hell in my life and just kept walking because I refused to say I can't.... my father looked down on me because I was a girl.... and I refused to bend. We have a lot of similarities, my friend. Including Rockford..LOL
Smiles, Carol

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 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
    Yes, Carol. It does seem as we do...
reply by Begin Again on 10-Jan-2025