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Friends of the friendless

A journey to gratitude

33 total reviews 
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

.This is authentic and relatable. There are mire people alone than we think. I spent long days and nights for decades completely alone. I understand it can get dark. Because winter is darker too, try to counteract it.

Maybe once a day post a few jokes here. I'll read and reply. Consistency is so important and the caregivers you have are happy to spend time with you I'm sure. Write a super hero poem or story about caregivers who live super he t I double lives, fiction.

You have people who care.

I do.

Have a good day,

Alex :)



Just one note

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 Comment Written 17-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
    Thanks, Alex, for the six stars and awesome review. I don't tell jokes so that won't work and I don't like to write fiction so that won't work either. Thanks for the suggestions, I know your heart is in the right place.
    Happy Holidays, my friend!
    Jesse
reply by Alexandra Trovato on 19-Dec-2024
    I got that going for me. Yes. I support whatever you choose for you. :)

    Holidays are stressful. Jan 2 will be here soon. ;)
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

What a wonderful, but sad story. It sucks not having friends or family around at this time of year. You are never alone Jesse you have all of you friends here on Fanstory. I too have no friends other than my Fanstory friends. It helps me get through my day.

This is a heart tugging story

Cecilia

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
    So we have that in common not having friends other than here on Fanstory. Thanks for the kind and thoughtful review.
    Take care, my friend!
    Jesse
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 19-Dec-2024
    Yes sir we do. This is the best set of friends I have ever had. It's great to be part of a community where people genuinely care.

    Have a great evening my friend
Comment from Peter Jarvis
Excellent
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Journey to Gratitude" is a deeply personal and heartfelt piece that captures the essence of loneliness and the search for connection during the holiday season. The narrative starts with a nostalgic reference to "I Love Lucy," using humor to juxtapose the current sense of isolation. This sets the stage for a poignant exploration of the author's feelings of abandonment and longing for human connection.

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 Comment Written 17-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
    You nailed it on the head, Peter, with this revealing review. I long for connection of the human kind. Person to person talks and hugs go a long way toward fulfillment of the personal kind.
    Jesse