Snow Check
A reason to stay in bed47 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Paul.
-You have used your 20 syllables well with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Very good nature imagery with the cold and snow.
-A good reason to forget the run and stay inside.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Paul.
-You have used your 20 syllables well with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Very good nature imagery with the cold and snow.
-A good reason to forget the run and stay inside.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Pam. It doesn't have to snowing very hard.
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You are welcome, Paul. I appreciate your reply.
Comment from Janet Foor
Cold and snow are perfect reasons to roll over and stay in bed and forgo the early morning workout.
Great artwork to complement your fun twenty syllable poem.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Cold and snow are perfect reasons to roll over and stay in bed and forgo the early morning workout.
Great artwork to complement your fun twenty syllable poem.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Janet. Some days that bed can be really comfortable.
Comment from zanya
Yes here's one for our times as we struggle to maintain our healthy regimes it is good to once in a while forego the early morning run when there's 'a foot of snow.'
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Yes here's one for our times as we struggle to maintain our healthy regimes it is good to once in a while forego the early morning run when there's 'a foot of snow.'
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Zanya. Sometimes it only takes a few inches.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
LOL I would forego my morning workout in a foot of snow myself. Of course, here in Texas they'd close down the entire for weeks maybe even months. LOL I enjoyed reading this contest entry. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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LOL I would forego my morning workout in a foot of snow myself. Of course, here in Texas they'd close down the entire for weeks maybe even months. LOL I enjoyed reading this contest entry. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Barb. We used to get a lot of snow here on the Maine coast, but lately it has been much less.
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We've actually had snow the past few years, but it isn't enough to write home about.
Comment from Gunner Lil
Twenty right on the button. A great picture also. Good job.
An easy read that does say a lot.
I hate running on a clear, dry day. A foot of snow-oh no.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Twenty right on the button. A great picture also. Good job.
An easy read that does say a lot.
I hate running on a clear, dry day. A foot of snow-oh no.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Lil. We usually don't get much snow until Christmas. Then the white stuff sticks around until March.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Great job Paul.
You hit the 20 syllables on the button and the story is outstanding. I agree wholeheartedly with you. The poem is funny and makes great sense. Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Great job Paul.
You hit the 20 syllables on the button and the story is outstanding. I agree wholeheartedly with you. The poem is funny and makes great sense. Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Robert. The poem is funny, but the frost bite is not.
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You're welcome, Paul. I agree.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Paul, I don't blame you to forgot your morning run when there's a foot of snow. I would definitely stay inside with the fire on. Good luck with this great poem for the contest. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Hi Paul, I don't blame you to forgot your morning run when there's a foot of snow. I would definitely stay inside with the fire on. Good luck with this great poem for the contest. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Ulla. Do you get any snow in Spain?
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It depends where you are in Spain. Sierra Nevada is the highest mountain and it's great for skiing. Inland and Northern Spain and the Pyrenees get loads of snow. I'm at the mid, south end of the Mediterranean and we hardly ever see snow, even in the mountains where I am looking down at the Med. We grow citrus trees, olive trees and almond trees.
Comment from Tim Margetts
Seems legit! :)
I think it is often too easy to get so wrapped in the depths of a poem that forgetting simplicity is often done.
You neatly capture a simple moment, a mood.
Nicely done
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Seems legit! :)
I think it is often too easy to get so wrapped in the depths of a poem that forgetting simplicity is often done.
You neatly capture a simple moment, a mood.
Nicely done
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Tim. The short ones are a little tough for me.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh goodness, please don't rush the white stuff. We have been having an unseasonably warm start to autumn here, and I am sure there is going to be a snowfall soon. "A reason to stay in bed" for sure!
This is a little charmer -- indeed, forego the run when there's a foot of snow, but your rhyme doesn't go unnoticed -- in a twenty syllable poem, no less! Well done. A contender, certainly! Best of luck. :)
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Oh goodness, please don't rush the white stuff. We have been having an unseasonably warm start to autumn here, and I am sure there is going to be a snowfall soon. "A reason to stay in bed" for sure!
This is a little charmer -- indeed, forego the run when there's a foot of snow, but your rhyme doesn't go unnoticed -- in a twenty syllable poem, no less! Well done. A contender, certainly! Best of luck. :)
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Dawn. I'm sure that Toronto will get its share of the white stuff.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 20 syllable poem contest. LOL I like your poem and I can appreciate your way of thinking! I find that the best thing to do when there is a foot of snow, is to stay under the covers and avoid running at all costs! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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An excellent entry for the 20 syllable poem contest. LOL I like your poem and I can appreciate your way of thinking! I find that the best thing to do when there is a foot of snow, is to stay under the covers and avoid running at all costs! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Marilyn. Under the covers is always an inviting place.