Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Roy, what a great tribute to your friends? Brother? Etc. beautifully written intetesting rhyming scheme. I'd been with my husband (his second marriage; my first) for 45 years and then he died. I still cry a lot. He died 6/27 last year.

I especially liked this stanza

"We may not own Chateaus in France
or own a fort in Spain.
But we will own the universe
when we sing love's refrain."

Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 15-May-2024

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reply by the author on 16-May-2024

Thanks Pam, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Beautiful, Roy! Whenever two people reach such a milestone in life (especially nowadays) it should be celebrated by one and all. You've written a beautiful poem for them and I am sure they will be very pleased.
Smiles, Carol

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 Comment Written 15-May-2024

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reply by the author on 16-May-2024

Thanks Carol, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

A lovely tribute to proven love is always a time to rejoice. Well said, I pray that these beautiful words based on real love encourage us I'm oír own relationships.
RJ

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 Comment Written 15-May-2024

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reply by the author on 16-May-2024

Thanks RJ, for these Terrific comments and review, blessings Roy

reply by RJ Heritage on 16-May-2024

You're very welcome
RJ