Super Bowl
About the game in rhyme42 total reviews
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed this poem. Very creative. It flows well. The rhyming scheme is good. Love the picture. It is good for this poem. Great job. Well written
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I enjoyed this poem. Very creative. It flows well. The rhyming scheme is good. Love the picture. It is good for this poem. Great job. Well written
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Brenda, thanks so much for the lovely review and comments for my Super Bowl poem. You are so kind and I so appreciate it, my very dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Terry Broxson
LOL, well how fun is? I'll tell you--it is six stars full of fun. Debi, how creative to come up with this poem for the Super Bowl. For this one, I think there are good stories on both sides. Whoever wins it will deserve it. I'll cheer them both! Well done. Terry.
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LOL, well how fun is? I'll tell you--it is six stars full of fun. Debi, how creative to come up with this poem for the Super Bowl. For this one, I think there are good stories on both sides. Whoever wins it will deserve it. I'll cheer them both! Well done. Terry.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Hi Terry, well how great is it that your team is destined to win. Congrats! LOL.
Seriously, we feel the same way. It should be a good game.
Thanks so much for the fun review and comments and for the awesome six stars. As always, you are so kind and I so appreciate it, my very dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from nomi338
Sounds like you have watched a game or two. Not like my greedy, dumb cousin. He thought the invitation was to eat soup out of a bowl. That fool showed up ready to eat soup and could not understand why there were hot wings, hot dogs, beer and chips. He kept asking, "Where's the soup?" What a dummy. LOL. I enjoyed the poem. Another great, creative gem.
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Sounds like you have watched a game or two. Not like my greedy, dumb cousin. He thought the invitation was to eat soup out of a bowl. That fool showed up ready to eat soup and could not understand why there were hot wings, hot dogs, beer and chips. He kept asking, "Where's the soup?" What a dummy. LOL. I enjoyed the poem. Another great, creative gem.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Hey Nomi, who eats just soup on Super Bowl? LOL, we are having chili, but with all the fixings. Even tho I have to be careful with the salt. And yes, I love football. With three brothers, I had to learn it well very young to play and then they all played in HS.... My best friend of forty years, her cousin is TJ Hockinson from the MN Vikings. This year we had so many injuries that we had backups to the backups for quarter back. OUCH!
Thanks so much for the fun review and comments and for the awesome six stars. As always, you are so kind and I so appreciate it, my very dear BBB
Love, Debi
Comment from Jacob1395
I wouldn't even know where to begin with the rules of American football, I believe it's a mash up of rugby and football, but I can never get to grips with rugby either. I always enjoy watching the half time shows when I can. A well written piece, Debi, I enjoyed reading it.
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I wouldn't even know where to begin with the rules of American football, I believe it's a mash up of rugby and football, but I can never get to grips with rugby either. I always enjoy watching the half time shows when I can. A well written piece, Debi, I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Hi Jacob, and thanks so much. You are too kind. When I looked at my poem this morning I could tell that the wrap form did not work well with this one, as it left it too bumpy. So I disabled it and worked it into a monorhyme and think it's much better now. So thank you for being so gracious about it, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Sally Law
A six star rating for this one. Go ahead and say it though. Kick some ass. I insist. No one will be offended. Watching from the cheap seats with the fam.
Sending you my best today as always, my friend, and blessings abundant.
Love,
Sal and the men XOs
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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A six star rating for this one. Go ahead and say it though. Kick some ass. I insist. No one will be offended. Watching from the cheap seats with the fam.
Sending you my best today as always, my friend, and blessings abundant.
Love,
Sal and the men XOs
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Hello Sally Marie.
you are too good to me
Forever I will be
A thankful Debi Lee
Thanks so much for your gracious six stars, my friend. You are too kind. When I looked at my poem this morning I could tell that the wrap form did not work well with this one, as it left it too bumpy. So I disabled it and worked it into a monorhyme and think it's much better now. So thank you for being so gracious about it. Love, Debi
Comment from John Ciarmello
Ahh, the Super Bowl! I don't follow much football and am only forced to watch as my sons are huge game fans. Although everyone likes a good game, and I think this one will be close, Debi!
Super Poem for the Super Bowl! Best, JohnC
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Ahh, the Super Bowl! I don't follow much football and am only forced to watch as my sons are huge game fans. Although everyone likes a good game, and I think this one will be close, Debi!
Super Poem for the Super Bowl! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Hello John, and thanks so much. You are too kind. When I looked at my poem this morning I could tell that the wrap form did not work well with this one, as it left it too bumpy. So I disabled it and worked it into a monorhyme and think it's much better now. So thank you for being so gracious about it, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from royowen
It seems to be a big deal here, although I'm not fond of American football, it's similar to rugby,. But they are having a lot of fans at the local hotel, thanks for this deftly written poem Debi, well done, blessings Roy
Suggestion: The ball is handed off...
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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It seems to be a big deal here, although I'm not fond of American football, it's similar to rugby,. But they are having a lot of fans at the local hotel, thanks for this deftly written poem Debi, well done, blessings Roy
Suggestion: The ball is handed off...
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Hi Roy, and thanks so much. You are too kind. When I looked at my poem this morning I could tell that the wrap form did not work well with this one, as it left it too bumpy. So I disabled it and worked it into a monorhyme and think it's much better now. So thank you for being so gracious about it, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
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Welcome Debi
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
We don't have super-bowl here so I don't really know what it's like. But I did enjoy your poem, Debi. I loved the way you had the internal rhyme in some lines, just as if we were watching the race to get over the line. The line:::
As quarterback completes his pass
player with mass, may kick some... grass... was especially funny. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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We don't have super-bowl here so I don't really know what it's like. But I did enjoy your poem, Debi. I loved the way you had the internal rhyme in some lines, just as if we were watching the race to get over the line. The line:::
As quarterback completes his pass
player with mass, may kick some... grass... was especially funny. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Dearest Sandra, thanks so much. You are too kind. When I looked at my poem this morning I could tell that the wrap form did not work well with this one, as it left it too bumpy. So I disabled it and worked it into a monorhyme and think it's much better now. So thank you for being so gracious about it, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Navada
I really enjoyed the unusual rhyming scheme here, including the effective and lively internal rhyme. As an Australian, my experience of the Super Bowl has usually been seeing the halftime performances, but I understand what a massive cultural phenomenon it is in the States. Bit of international interest this year because of the Taylor effect! :)
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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I really enjoyed the unusual rhyming scheme here, including the effective and lively internal rhyme. As an Australian, my experience of the Super Bowl has usually been seeing the halftime performances, but I understand what a massive cultural phenomenon it is in the States. Bit of international interest this year because of the Taylor effect! :)
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Hi Navada, and thanks so much. You are too kind. When I looked at my poem this morning I could tell that the wrap form did not work well with this one, as it left it too bumpy. So I disabled it and worked it into a monorhyme and think it's much better now. So thank you for being so gracious about it, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Ricky1024
The super bowl poem was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a wonderful day.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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The super bowl poem was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a wonderful day.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Hi Ricky, and thanks so much. You are too kind. When I looked at my poem this morning I could tell that the wrap form did not work well with this one, as it left it too bumpy. So I disabled it and worked it into a monorhyme and think it's much better now. So thank you for being so gracious about it, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
