Heroes in the Hallways
An ode32 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is such a beautiful ode to teachers. Your rhymes and descriptive words carry a clear image, of which I am familiar. I was a teacher for nearly 30 years and I each day I looked forward to getting into work. I was a teacher in various settings and was working with students with varying needs and abilities. I felt the students i was blessed to know, were my heroes, too. There is so much we adults must slow down to learn from children and teens. Well written work here.
Best wishes
Alex
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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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This is such a beautiful ode to teachers. Your rhymes and descriptive words carry a clear image, of which I am familiar. I was a teacher for nearly 30 years and I each day I looked forward to getting into work. I was a teacher in various settings and was working with students with varying needs and abilities. I felt the students i was blessed to know, were my heroes, too. There is so much we adults must slow down to learn from children and teens. Well written work here.
Best wishes
Alex
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Yusita
This almost made me tear up. It is so well-written in its heartfelt message and beautiful tribute to teachers, who are many times under-appreciated. We don't realize it, but they really are "a big deal". They impact little lives that, in turn, help determine the kind of adults the world will be left with. I worked as an aide in the school system for several years, and I saw many teachers who put their heart and soul into their jobs. I had high respect, admiration, and appreciation for them. In any case, this was such a beautiful poem... a perfect one, I'd say. Each line was profound, the message was beautiful, the meter was flawless, and you even managed to make lines 1 and 3 as well as 2 and 4 rhyme. May God continue blessing your talent. All the best. Thanks for this lovely piece.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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This almost made me tear up. It is so well-written in its heartfelt message and beautiful tribute to teachers, who are many times under-appreciated. We don't realize it, but they really are "a big deal". They impact little lives that, in turn, help determine the kind of adults the world will be left with. I worked as an aide in the school system for several years, and I saw many teachers who put their heart and soul into their jobs. I had high respect, admiration, and appreciation for them. In any case, this was such a beautiful poem... a perfect one, I'd say. Each line was profound, the message was beautiful, the meter was flawless, and you even managed to make lines 1 and 3 as well as 2 and 4 rhyme. May God continue blessing your talent. All the best. Thanks for this lovely piece.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Yusita, thank you so much for this lovely comment! Xoxo
