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Comment from lancellot
Hmm, some of these couplets are well crafted. Some feel a bit forced and not quite on topic. Some of the couplets match what the contest ask for, as you describe what your man has that you love. Others feel more like general marriage advice.
I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
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Hmm, some of these couplets are well crafted. Some feel a bit forced and not quite on topic. Some of the couplets match what the contest ask for, as you describe what your man has that you love. Others feel more like general marriage advice.
I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
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Thanks lancellot. And I will look at it again and see if I can distinguish which are which, but appreciate your great feedback. I thank you much for that my friend!
Comment from nomi338
To find and hold onto the one of whom you dream is always a wonderful thing. The problem is, when you have a dreamboat, some jealous person will always want to hijack your dream and make your dream theirs. This is why it is important for that dream boat to be loyal.
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To find and hold onto the one of whom you dream is always a wonderful thing. The problem is, when you have a dreamboat, some jealous person will always want to hijack your dream and make your dream theirs. This is why it is important for that dream boat to be loyal.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2023
Comment from prettybluebirds
It looks like you have found your prince. Not all men are as nice or considerate as yours appears to be. You are a fortunate lady. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.
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It looks like you have found your prince. Not all men are as nice or considerate as yours appears to be. You are a fortunate lady. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2023
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did an amazing job with your contest entry, Mystery
Author. I loved reading it. I liked everything about it--the
perfect picture, the color scheme, the font choice, the rhymes,
and your heartfelt message. What I liked the best was the
progression of time as the girl became a woman and what
she was sure she wanted in a man--her Prince Charming.
Also another thing I really loved was how you included you
and your hubby as you wrote about the traits you desired
that he always had. As they say, it was fate you and he met
and married. The video was awesome and a great addition to
your wonderful poem.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
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You did an amazing job with your contest entry, Mystery
Author. I loved reading it. I liked everything about it--the
perfect picture, the color scheme, the font choice, the rhymes,
and your heartfelt message. What I liked the best was the
progression of time as the girl became a woman and what
she was sure she wanted in a man--her Prince Charming.
Also another thing I really loved was how you included you
and your hubby as you wrote about the traits you desired
that he always had. As they say, it was fate you and he met
and married. The video was awesome and a great addition to
your wonderful poem.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 15-Jan-2023
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was a wonderful poem. You showed the reality of marriage as not always perfect and romantic. You advised that humor is good for a relationship. This was like a coming of age romantically. Great job. Good luck in the contest. Gretchen
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This was a wonderful poem. You showed the reality of marriage as not always perfect and romantic. You advised that humor is good for a relationship. This was like a coming of age romantically. Great job. Good luck in the contest. Gretchen
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Comment Written 15-Jan-2023