Lingering Devotion
First meeting.44 total reviews
Comment from Jay Squires
Once again, you leave me enthralled and wanting more, but yours was a bittersweet love story, that left a lingering feeling, not unlike that remembered feeling after watching the original "Love Story". A feeling of being almost fulfilled. You do a helluva job with this kind of fiction, Ric. I'd like to see more of it.
Jay
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Once again, you leave me enthralled and wanting more, but yours was a bittersweet love story, that left a lingering feeling, not unlike that remembered feeling after watching the original "Love Story". A feeling of being almost fulfilled. You do a helluva job with this kind of fiction, Ric. I'd like to see more of it.
Jay
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much, Jay, for your kind and encouraging review. It's always an honor to have such a talented and one of my favorite writers take time out to read my posts. I just wanted to try something different, and I'm so glad you liked it. Much appreciated!
Comment from lyenochka
Ric, you're poet! And I loved your story about how you met Lori. But I am so sad to hear about Lori's passing before you could reconnect again. You really did hit it off. You sure know how to get a girl's attention!
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Ric, you're poet! And I loved your story about how you met Lori. But I am so sad to hear about Lori's passing before you could reconnect again. You really did hit it off. You sure know how to get a girl's attention!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much, Helen, for your extra special six-star review and kind words. Don't forget this was written as fiction. LOL. Maybe there are little bits of truth . . . maybe more, but I'll never tell. Me, a poet? Never. I just wanted to step outside my comfort zone and offer up something different than my normal action genre. Hope you liked it. I appreciate YOU!
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I believed every word of it! I can imagine you don't need the help of Cyrano to write pretty words as you possess both the looks and the words!
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You are the good Lord's messenger, forever spreading joy and cheer as you witness endlessly! Your husband is a lucky man!
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Thank you, Ric! We both feel blessed as we still are working on smoothing each other's flaws. 😂 God is gracious. Blessings to you! 💖
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Was this worth using a premier six-star rating??? Anytime you get a cute woman involved attracts the most ardent pervs. Envy also played apart as I could have, would have, should have played that part more often but learned a lesson approaching a high heeled person in a short black dinner dress on Waikiki only to have it turn and in a bAss voice ask if I wanted to go HIS way. No thanks n I left.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Was this worth using a premier six-star rating??? Anytime you get a cute woman involved attracts the most ardent pervs. Envy also played apart as I could have, would have, should have played that part more often but learned a lesson approaching a high heeled person in a short black dinner dress on Waikiki only to have it turn and in a bAss voice ask if I wanted to go HIS way. No thanks n I left.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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ROFL! Only you Tom. LOL. You've got me so tickled and watery eyed that I can't see to reply. Now, sore belly and all, thank you for the extra special six-star review and kind words. I just wanted to write something different and outside my comfort zone, and honestly, I've never been more surprised at the generous responses. I always enjoyed reading your posts and getting your reviews. I was wilder than a choked duck back in my younger days, and if I were a gambler, I'd bet you weren't innocent either. LOL. I appreciate YOU!
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Mentally, I was Not angelic but physically I only wished to be but the NAVY?s s.t.d. Films kept me in chk. 🤪
Comment from damommy
What can I say? I was hooked from the beginning of this story which I suspect is mostly true. I understand about the long off and on relationship. I had one, too, many years ago. Did you really fake a heart attack and fall to the ground? That would take a lot of courage. Enjoyed the story very much.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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What can I say? I was hooked from the beginning of this story which I suspect is mostly true. I understand about the long off and on relationship. I had one, too, many years ago. Did you really fake a heart attack and fall to the ground? That would take a lot of courage. Enjoyed the story very much.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Yvonne, for your generous review and kind words. I wrote this as fiction, but of course, as in most fiction, many elements are true. I did fall to the ground and fake a heart attack. I didn't really want anyone to think I was having a real heart attack, but I did want the young ladies attention. And lucky for me, it worked. Much appreciate and I'm glad you liked it!
Comment from jenintorre
Wow! Ric.This is absolutely knockout . I love it and I guess it's true. I particularly loved the description of the garb that you were wearing when you first met Lori especially 'bill turned backwards' and also the erotic way you described her. I cried at the end. You are a wicked writer! You fascinate me and make me feel very humble.
Your devoted fan Jen.
P.s congratulations on your 2nd place. Of course you got my vote.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Wow! Ric.This is absolutely knockout . I love it and I guess it's true. I particularly loved the description of the garb that you were wearing when you first met Lori especially 'bill turned backwards' and also the erotic way you described her. I cried at the end. You are a wicked writer! You fascinate me and make me feel very humble.
Your devoted fan Jen.
P.s congratulations on your 2nd place. Of course you got my vote.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much, Jen, for your extra special six-star review and kind words. Of course, I wrote this as fiction, but as with all fiction, there are always elements of truth. As you can probably figure, I was wilder than a choked duck back in my younger days. What am I talking about, I haven't changed that much, I'm just mellowed and nicer. LOL. I always look forward to reading your posts and receiving your reviews. I'm your devoted fan, too! And I hope Torre won't take it wrong, but a great big bear hug and a kiss on the forehead for you! I always appreciate YOU!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I absolutely loved this post, the poetry, the prose. It all worked together to present this great read. Thank you for sharing.
The next night, my friend David tagged along, (The following night)
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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I absolutely loved this post, the poetry, the prose. It all worked together to present this great read. Thank you for sharing.
The next night, my friend David tagged along, (The following night)
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much, Barbara, for your extra special six-star review, kind words, and suggestion (that I've already fixed-ha ha). There's nothing makes me happier than when you, someone I read, enjoy, and learn from regularly, reads my stories. I'm glad you like it. I appreciate your stories, reviews, and most of all YOU!
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Thank you and you're welcome
Comment from nomi338
Killer. This reminds me of an incident that happened to me many years ago, I may write about it some day. As men we, some of us at least, have that one earth shattering incident that changes our world in a fashion that we are forever affected. I thoroughly enjoyed the retelling of this event or series of events actually. It seemed right on.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Killer. This reminds me of an incident that happened to me many years ago, I may write about it some day. As men we, some of us at least, have that one earth shattering incident that changes our world in a fashion that we are forever affected. I thoroughly enjoyed the retelling of this event or series of events actually. It seemed right on.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much, Nomi, for your extra special six-star review and kind words. You are absolutely right about that one earth-shattering event in most men's lives that change them forever. It's nice to get your reviews an opinions, since you always seem to read my mind and relate. I appreciate YOU!
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Thank you for the kind remarks.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I absolutely loved this! It is a great life story, and I'm so glad that you shared it with us. I like reading all of your work, but this one is my favorite so far. I kept reading to see if you were going to "get the girl." And if you'd pulled that fake heart attack on me, I would have met up with you too. I think it's terribly romantic, in a redneck kinda way, lol!
As I assume this is a true story, my sympathy for your loss. That must have been quite the shock.
Pam
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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I absolutely loved this! It is a great life story, and I'm so glad that you shared it with us. I like reading all of your work, but this one is my favorite so far. I kept reading to see if you were going to "get the girl." And if you'd pulled that fake heart attack on me, I would have met up with you too. I think it's terribly romantic, in a redneck kinda way, lol!
As I assume this is a true story, my sympathy for your loss. That must have been quite the shock.
Pam
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much, Pam, for your extra special six-star review and kind words. I always look forward to reading your work and getting your reviews. I'm shocked you would have met up with me, even more so than finding out you like zombie movies. Just goes to show I don't read people as well as I once did. My head swelled at "terribly romantic," just before rapidly deflating at "redneck kinda way." "When in Rome, act like the Romans." And for those who know, Florida back then, was the redneck capital of the world. I'd like to tell you this whole story is fiction, but as with all fiction, there are always elements of truth. Sorry for the rambling reply, you just surprised and got me tickled. I appreciate your kindness and encouragement! LOL.
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The redneck reply wasn't meant as a dig - I grew up in Florida, so I know the culture, both past and present:-) Yes, I think all of our fictions have a grain of truth - or a few grains.
Have a great Sunday.
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Oh, the redneck remark wasn't taken as a dig. I thought it was cute and very appropriate. Again, I've opened my mouth and inserted foot with another of my surmises concerning you. Zombies, your willingness to meet a fake heart-attack clown, and my reference to the Redneck Riviera as the area was/is called, and it being your home state. I kept a home in Tampa for 19 years and spent large portions of most years between there and Miami. Why I assumed you were a yankee girl, I have no idea. I've been a fan of your writing from day one, and the more I've learned, the more interesting and likeable you've become. Your versatility is a wonderful tool! Yes, you are so right, all our fictions have some degree of truth. And others are all truth, precisely word for word, close as we can remember. Truths we hide behind fictional labels to protect the most personal secrets. Thank you for your sympathy from such a kind heart. There I go again, with another assumption. Maybe someday, I'll guess right or learn too keep my mouth shut. LOL. Have a wonderful week!
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Born in the Midwest, raised and retired in Florida, but you were right about me being a "Yankee girl". Twenty-six years in Connecticut shaped my philosophical and political viewpoints significantly, but I try not to color my writing with my "blue view".
Hope you're working on something good.
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Yeah, I finally assumed something right about you. LOL. I'm not working on anything. I don't write much, just when the mood hits me or I'm bored. Then, I whip something out in an hour or two and space its posting a couple weeks after my last. Sunshine stated, southern bayou-ed, or blue hued view, you're alright with me! :-)
Comment from Ulla
Ric, this is certainly a different kind of story from you than we are used to. I liked a lot, actually, both the story and that side of you, even replenished with poetry. A great story. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Ric, this is certainly a different kind of story from you than we are used to. I liked a lot, actually, both the story and that side of you, even replenished with poetry. A great story. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much, Ulla, for your kind and generous review. Yes, I thought I'd try to show another side, and I'm glad you liked. But don't tell anyone and spoil my rough and tough image. LOL. I always enjoy reading your work and getting your reviews. Much appreciated!
Comment from Terry Broxson
Ric, love the story! So many good one-liners it would be hard to choose my favorite. You certainly open the door for a fictional story based on real events. Outstanding as usual. Just one thought, you used the word Yea...and I thought you meant...Yeah, but maybe not. Terry.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Ric, love the story! So many good one-liners it would be hard to choose my favorite. You certainly open the door for a fictional story based on real events. Outstanding as usual. Just one thought, you used the word Yea...and I thought you meant...Yeah, but maybe not. Terry.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Thanks, Terry, for taking time out to read my story. Of course, my story is fiction, but as with all fiction there are always certain elements of truth. But I'll leave separating the two to the readers. LOL. I intended to use "yea." Yeah, is a totally different word to me than a lazy yea in the place of yes. But now you've got me to wondering if, I'm the only one. LOL. Thanks again, much appreciated!
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I also used yea..., but then somebody told me I really meant yeah. I don't how they knew what I meant, but still, I passed it on! LOL.
By the way, what is the deal with black and white uniforms... weird. Terryl.
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Hey, Terry,
Well, I couldn't quit thinking about yea and yeah after you brought it to my attention. I decided you wouldn't have brought it up if you didn't think you were right. So, when I went to check it out, I learned that my yea isn't wrong, but it's considered old fashioned and is only used for voting yea or nay these days. And like you tried to tell my hard-headed butt, yeah is the modern way to say "yay." I have always thought that yeah was like cheering for a football team, and yea was the slang for yes. Anyway, I just wanted to tell you thanks a lot for pointing it out to me. You've saved me from repeatedly making a common mistake, spelling it the way I have my whole life. LOL. Much appreciated!
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LOL, I learned the hard way.