Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 103 "My jewel has no price"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from sunnilicious
This was a beautifully written nature poem. I found a couple alliterations to stand up like drink drunkenly and showers-spattering--sprinkling-splashing. Priceless observations. Nicely done. Excellent work :)
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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This was a beautifully written nature poem. I found a couple alliterations to stand up like drink drunkenly and showers-spattering--sprinkling-splashing. Priceless observations. Nicely done. Excellent work :)
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Irish Rain
This is a stunning jewel.
You have a very poetic way of writing.
Love, love the picture!
A true paradise indeed!
Hope this wins, it deserves to!
Blessings...
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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This is a stunning jewel.
You have a very poetic way of writing.
Love, love the picture!
A true paradise indeed!
Hope this wins, it deserves to!
Blessings...
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Irish Rain, wow! Yes, we are truly blessed! But .. we must ...pause and breathe in every precious moment to truly absorb the gift of God right before our own eyes.
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So true!! Love your writing!!
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This is a great poem, and the picture goes perfectly. You have beauty in living color. Nature not splashed on an open canvas. You have the original, a treasure from God. Money can not buy anything God created. He put these things on earth to freely enjoy. To take care of future generations.
Thank you for sharing such a great poem.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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This is a great poem, and the picture goes perfectly. You have beauty in living color. Nature not splashed on an open canvas. You have the original, a treasure from God. Money can not buy anything God created. He put these things on earth to freely enjoy. To take care of future generations.
Thank you for sharing such a great poem.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Carolyn I so appreciate your comments! Yes, we are truly blessed! But .. we must ...pause and breathe in every precious moment to truly absorb the gift of God.
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You are welcome.
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You are welcome and yes we must enjoy everything.
Comment from lyenochka
You certainly describe a paradise right out your back door. And I'm glad that you so generously share with your "four-legged neighbors." It's a true blessing to be reminded of the treasures of God's creation daily! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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You certainly describe a paradise right out your back door. And I'm glad that you so generously share with your "four-legged neighbors." It's a true blessing to be reminded of the treasures of God's creation daily! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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lyenochka, yes we are truly blessed! But we must ...pause and breathe in every precious moment to truly absorb the gift of God.
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Amen! Thanks for the reminder to Breathe in His blessings!
Comment from Sally Law
Beautifully penned poem and what a view! I wish I had your backyard! Ours is smaller with a lake though, and we get all kinds of creatures and water fowl.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Beautifully penned poem and what a view! I wish I had your backyard! Ours is smaller with a lake though, and we get all kinds of creatures and water fowl.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))
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Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Hi Sal, any water is always a bonus! Yes we are truly blessed! But .. we must ...pause and breathe in every precious moment to truly absorb the gift of God.
Comment from mrsmajor
I enjoyed reading this well written description of your back yard, in all it's glory. Colors, plants, trees, all enjoying the humidity of the day, that causes some to drip and enjoy the moisture...Such is indeed an example of the Eden that was intended, with all the visitors, both human and animals to enjoy..Your word usage was beautifully chosen, and used...I
I truly enjoyed reading this Good luck in the contest, this is a very good 6 star entry.
Warmly,
Victoria
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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I enjoyed reading this well written description of your back yard, in all it's glory. Colors, plants, trees, all enjoying the humidity of the day, that causes some to drip and enjoy the moisture...Such is indeed an example of the Eden that was intended, with all the visitors, both human and animals to enjoy..Your word usage was beautifully chosen, and used...I
I truly enjoyed reading this Good luck in the contest, this is a very good 6 star entry.
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Victoria, I am honored! Oh, my!
Yes we are truly blessed! But .. we must ...pause and breathe in every precious moment to truly absorb the gift of God.
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You're very welcome, and yes indeed life will pass by so quickly, if we don't take the time to pause, and take a moment to appreciate our Blessings.
Stay well....Victoria
Comment from royowen
You're very privileged to live in such a grand place of herbivorous proliferation and abundance Jim. Very descriptively image laden poem, that exhorts the watcher to drink in the wonder of creation, beautifully written Jim, an excellent work, blessings Roy
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You're very privileged to live in such a grand place of herbivorous proliferation and abundance Jim. Very descriptively image laden poem, that exhorts the watcher to drink in the wonder of creation, beautifully written Jim, an excellent work, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Roy, Yes we are truly blessed! But .. we must ...pause and breathe in every precious moment to truly absorb the gift of God. Thank you kind sir!
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I agree
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
Your nature poems are exquisite! I really enjoyed this one. The free verse flows as it should and you used poetry tools well. I liked the "taste" of resplendent sanctuary said aloud. I wish you well in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Your nature poems are exquisite! I really enjoyed this one. The free verse flows as it should and you used poetry tools well. I liked the "taste" of resplendent sanctuary said aloud. I wish you well in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Verna,I am honored! Smiling back, Yes we are truly blessed! But .. we must ...pause and breathe in every precious moment to truly absorb the gift of God.