Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Life's Lessons Learned"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from June Sargent
We can never completely list all the life lessons we've learned from our parents and grandparents. Memories will rise now and then to remind us how much we owe them for helping us become who we are today. You did very well with your interpretation of this artwork. I enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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We can never completely list all the life lessons we've learned from our parents and grandparents. Memories will rise now and then to remind us how much we owe them for helping us become who we are today. You did very well with your interpretation of this artwork. I enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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June, thank you.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a lovely peaceful poem to go with the peaceful scene in the picture. I could visualise the father and son sitting together, and and the father gently teaching the little boy how to fish. I found the whole thing so calming. Well done. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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What a lovely peaceful poem to go with the peaceful scene in the picture. I could visualise the father and son sitting together, and and the father gently teaching the little boy how to fish. I found the whole thing so calming. Well done. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Sandra, thank you!
Comment from RodG
Your narrative poem sets the scene of a father and son fishing in a moonlit lake. We see the father with his arm on the son's back, talking. But cite examples of what "life lessons" he might have shared.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Your narrative poem sets the scene of a father and son fishing in a moonlit lake. We see the father with his arm on the son's back, talking. But cite examples of what "life lessons" he might have shared.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Rod, Okay here are a few .... thanks!
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I rerated your revision. It?s much better.
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I rerated your revision. It?s much better.
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That is very kind of you, thank you.
Comment from Beck Fenton
Your words bring this reader right into the scene with you. The description of this fishing moment in time is exquisite. From the moonbeams to the ribbets of the frogs, you transported me and I am grateful for that journey.
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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Your words bring this reader right into the scene with you. The description of this fishing moment in time is exquisite. From the moonbeams to the ribbets of the frogs, you transported me and I am grateful for that journey.
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Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Thank you Beck!