Enshrouding Mists
Rhyming poem32 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There eerie about this write, a creepy night of mist at twilight in an old town with lots of hidden ghosts! You created an atmosphere of mystery and chilling shadows here Melissa. You have some gremlins on line eight, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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There eerie about this write, a creepy night of mist at twilight in an old town with lots of hidden ghosts! You created an atmosphere of mystery and chilling shadows here Melissa. You have some gremlins on line eight, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much, Dolly. I thought I had edited out the gremlins... this will be my second attempt. Hugs, my friend.
Melissa
Comment from prettybluebirds
You have a computer glitch in the second paragraph. Otherwise, it is perfect and I enjoyed reading it. The artwork is perfect for the writing and adds much to the meaning. Best of luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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You have a computer glitch in the second paragraph. Otherwise, it is perfect and I enjoyed reading it. The artwork is perfect for the writing and adds much to the meaning. Best of luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thank you! I edited out those old gremlins... :)
Melissa