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Youth has its moments and its minuses36 total reviews
Comment from Thatguypk
This is a very good piece about the confidence of youth. It gently hints at William Blakes's songs of innocence and experience, which basically puts forward the notion that youthful life is beautiful until society teaches us to fear and to hate and to feel shame.
PK
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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This is a very good piece about the confidence of youth. It gently hints at William Blakes's songs of innocence and experience, which basically puts forward the notion that youthful life is beautiful until society teaches us to fear and to hate and to feel shame.
PK
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Thank you for even putting my work and Blake's into the same thought!
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Thank you for even putting my work and Blake's into the same thought!
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Kids have so much to learn. As myself, I thought, I knew everything. Until I watched Jeopardy. That show will set you straight in a heart beat. Or Trivia Pursuit. It seems people have the same fears. This is a great poem.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Kids have so much to learn. As myself, I thought, I knew everything. Until I watched Jeopardy. That show will set you straight in a heart beat. Or Trivia Pursuit. It seems people have the same fears. This is a great poem.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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They do--but they have to act like they are more knowledgable than they can be. Thank you for your kind words.
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They do--but they have to act like they are more knowledgable than they can be. Thank you for your kind words.
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You are welcome.
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You are welcome.
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Comment from Eternal Muse
You bring out well that young people often hide their insecurity with different things - like "walking with authority" in your poem, to hide our insecurity.
A very wise and clever poem with great message. Excellent creative imagery. It should do very well in the contest, I wish you luck with it.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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You bring out well that young people often hide their insecurity with different things - like "walking with authority" in your poem, to hide our insecurity.
A very wise and clever poem with great message. Excellent creative imagery. It should do very well in the contest, I wish you luck with it.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Thank you fro you kind words.
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Thank you fro you kind words.
Comment from royowen
Oh "foolishness thy name is youth" I think, especially young males seem very very foolish when growing, it's a wonder more don't kill themselves and others than they do, perhaps God doesn't allow them to. A lovely, we crafted poem to please the reader, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Oh "foolishness thy name is youth" I think, especially young males seem very very foolish when growing, it's a wonder more don't kill themselves and others than they do, perhaps God doesn't allow them to. A lovely, we crafted poem to please the reader, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Thnk you for our kind words. I would not be young again for anythng.
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Thnk you for our kind words. I would not be young again for anythng.
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I?d take the body, but not wisdom, nor the attitude.
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A good point!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Truly, morally, simply you have shown in rhymes in a few words stating youth has its moments and its minuses so is the effect in living; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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Truly, morally, simply you have shown in rhymes in a few words stating youth has its moments and its minuses so is the effect in living; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from jessizero
You did a great job with the "when I was young" prompt and guidelines. Things do change the older you become. Thank you for sharing this. Best wishes.
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You did a great job with the "when I was young" prompt and guidelines. Things do change the older you become. Thank you for sharing this. Best wishes.
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Thank you.