Comment from damommy

Excellent

What a lovely way to describe a new day. Everything bright and fresh. You used a great choice of words to build your ABC poem with. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 21-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021

Hello Yvonne. Thank you very much. Often, I get up and write in the mornings when things around me are quiet and peaceful. hugs!

Melissa

Comment from royowen

Excellent

A beautifully written ABC poem Melissa, the beauty of the wording is descriptive and image bearing. I find it hard to personify my muse, but I know what you mean, a tryst is like a deliberate meeting to discuss, in a sense...language. Well done, beautifully written, good luck, Blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 21-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021

Thank you very much Roy. Often, I get up and write in the mornings when all is quiet. :). Have a lovely day!

Melissa

reply by royowen on 21-Mar-2021

I do too, I read them too, too many distractions otherwise.

Comment from Mrs. KT

Exceptional

Bravo, Melissa!
Bravo for the form - which is one I fail at attempting.
Bravo for the message and imagery as well!
Your room in the library is buzzing with creativity!
Best wishes in the contest!

Thank you for sharing!
diane

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021

Hello sweet Diane. Thanks for such a wonderfully encouraging review. I so appreciate it. I do plan on reserving one of those rooms again this week ;). It definitely helped... plus, our library does not mind if we bring in a big cup of Starbucks to help us along. LOL. Thanks... and big hugs!

Melissa