Time
For the one I love for all time.33 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This is one of the best explanations of time I have ever read or heard.
So lovely. Those are the times we cherish. Being with someone who means the world to us.
Ralf
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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This is one of the best explanations of time I have ever read or heard.
So lovely. Those are the times we cherish. Being with someone who means the world to us.
Ralf
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and compliments, dear Ralf! Blessings!
Sal XOs..
Comment from BethShelby
Nicely written four line poem. Time is an interesting subject. It does seem to move faster or slower depending on the circumstances. The fact that it stands still when you look into the eyes of some you love is a very romantic thought.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Nicely written four line poem. Time is an interesting subject. It does seem to move faster or slower depending on the circumstances. The fact that it stands still when you look into the eyes of some you love is a very romantic thought.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review of my poem, dear Beth.
Sal XOs....
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Such excellent use you have made of your few syllables! The sweet message conveyed is powerful: no matter what else is going on in life, time can't affect that one enduring love.
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Such excellent use you have made of your few syllables! The sweet message conveyed is powerful: no matter what else is going on in life, time can't affect that one enduring love.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and comments, dear Janice. I always love your reviews. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great contest entry, Sally. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Great job with the requirements of the contest. Your lines read well with great imagery. The videos are an added bonus. I understand how your poem relates to the one you love.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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This is a great contest entry, Sally. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Great job with the requirements of the contest. Your lines read well with great imagery. The videos are an added bonus. I understand how your poem relates to the one you love.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much for the wonderful review of my poem, dear Jan. Blessings for your day, Sally Xoxo
Comment from Ric Myworld
Aw, ain't that so sweet. Time is something we chase or race against our whole lives; then, as we get older, we try to slow down and save all we can as it seems to get faster. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Aw, ain't that so sweet. Time is something we chase or race against our whole lives; then, as we get older, we try to slow down and save all we can as it seems to get faster. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much for your lovely review of my poem. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Blessings always, Sally Xo
Comment from greyson ernst
congrats of being 2# novelist!!!!!!!!!!!!! but this poem is spectacular you won my vote nice job and as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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congrats of being 2# novelist!!!!!!!!!!!!! but this poem is spectacular you won my vote nice job and as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Hello Greyson! Thanks so much for your wonderful review and kind comments. Blessings for your day, Sally XOs...
Comment from fm wright
An absolutely wonderful entry for the four line contest. The things you have brought out about time are spot on and yet original in my thinking. The picture and videos so well back up your words. I especially like Jim Croce's "Time in a Bottle." I wish you the very best with this entry.
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An absolutely wonderful entry for the four line contest. The things you have brought out about time are spot on and yet original in my thinking. The picture and videos so well back up your words. I especially like Jim Croce's "Time in a Bottle." I wish you the very best with this entry.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous stars, dearest Faye. I'm so honored. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem and the Jim Croce song, too. Blessings always,
Sal XOs....xo.....
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You're welcome, dear Sally. Blessings to you and yours.
Faye
Comment from Mark D. R.
Sally,
This is good! And you selected the best illustration to complement your verse and entry. I really like Croce's song.
Best wishes in this contest.
Mark
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Sally,
This is good! And you selected the best illustration to complement your verse and entry. I really like Croce's song.
Best wishes in this contest.
Mark
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review, dear Mark. I knew you would like the font. Sending you my best today as always
Sal XOs...
Comment from Debbie Pope
I love this, Sally. This is the third four line poem that I have read. All three used the first person voice. It's such an effective tool. Personalizing your words makes them so much stronger.
I also like your use of contrast with slowing down, speeding up, and standing still.
The whole little thing is well crafted. Good job, my friend.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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I love this, Sally. This is the third four line poem that I have read. All three used the first person voice. It's such an effective tool. Personalizing your words makes them so much stronger.
I also like your use of contrast with slowing down, speeding up, and standing still.
The whole little thing is well crafted. Good job, my friend.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous compliments, dear Debbie. So good to see you! Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Very romantic indeed. Pure love, as they say, is eternal. A single or minute stretched out! Can't use an hourglass. Can we. Thanks for sharing. I liked the rhyming words about love and time. Good luck!
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Very romantic indeed. Pure love, as they say, is eternal. A single or minute stretched out! Can't use an hourglass. Can we. Thanks for sharing. I liked the rhyming words about love and time. Good luck!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review of my work. You are most gracious. Sending you my best and blessings always,
Sally :))
