This Time - That Time 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "The FINAL CHAPTER In The Trilogy"Third book in the time travel trilogy
31 total reviews
Comment from wordsfromsue
Oh wow!! How on Earth did you work out all of that storyline?! It'll take me awhile to get my head around everything Mildred revealed!
What a brilliant job you've done with this story. :-)
You should be proud!
One small correction:
But being James, who had often helped us with his research, he decided he would look up these facts up on the internet. (Omit the second 'up' and my spell check indicated internet should be capitalized: Internet)
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Oh wow!! How on Earth did you work out all of that storyline?! It'll take me awhile to get my head around everything Mildred revealed!
What a brilliant job you've done with this story. :-)
You should be proud!
One small correction:
But being James, who had often helped us with his research, he decided he would look up these facts up on the internet. (Omit the second 'up' and my spell check indicated internet should be capitalized: Internet)
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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LOL, you haven't seen the big bald spot and greying hair!! This part had to bring it all together, I'm amazed that it has. Thank you so very much for all the stars, the wonderful reviews, and your fabulous support. You've been wonderful. Big hugs. Sandra xxxx
Comment from Ulla
Awe, Sandra, this is a fabulous ending. I wish I could give you tree times the six stars. What a wonderful way you tie up the loose ends. I Love it! And how I will miss the story! But it has now come to a wonderful end. Thanks so much for sharing it all with us. Big hugs, my friend. Ulla xxxx
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Awe, Sandra, this is a fabulous ending. I wish I could give you tree times the six stars. What a wonderful way you tie up the loose ends. I Love it! And how I will miss the story! But it has now come to a wonderful end. Thanks so much for sharing it all with us. Big hugs, my friend. Ulla xxxx
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Bless your heart, thank you so very much, Ulla, for this terrific review and all the lovely stars. I'll miss them but I want to write some for Eric now, and then, who knows? Mildred is still around and so are the rest of the family. Thanks for always being so supportive, my friend. I've really appreciated it. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from damommy
I wish I could give you a hundred sixes. What a trip this story has been, and what talent it took to write it. This last chapter would have been confusing if it had been written by a less capable author. How clever you are to have worked all this out and tied all the loose ends up. I hope to see another book by you in the near future. I always look forward to your posts. Today, my impulse was to review you first, but I made myself go down the list and save the best for last!!!!!
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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I wish I could give you a hundred sixes. What a trip this story has been, and what talent it took to write it. This last chapter would have been confusing if it had been written by a less capable author. How clever you are to have worked all this out and tied all the loose ends up. I hope to see another book by you in the near future. I always look forward to your posts. Today, my impulse was to review you first, but I made myself go down the list and save the best for last!!!!!
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Aww, Yvonne, thank you so very much, you couldn't have said anything nicer. Thank you for always being so supportive of my story, you've been great. The six stars are fabulous, but what you said is worth so much more to me, my friend. Sending you a ginormous hug. :)) Sandra xxx
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Caught that hug and sending you one.
Comment from Mistydawn
Your great great grandma is your nanny, that would be so cool. I've always wondered if reincarnation really happens. Guess we'll never know.
Your chapter wrapped up everything nicely. The part about the old asp running through town yelling obsenities made me laugh. What Tommy said was perfect, they don't know just how right he is, hehehe. I hope Charles has a long long stay. This was a perfect ending to a terrific book, thank you for sharing it with us. I do hope it brings you a lot of success. I do hope you'll post another story soon.
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Your great great grandma is your nanny, that would be so cool. I've always wondered if reincarnation really happens. Guess we'll never know.
Your chapter wrapped up everything nicely. The part about the old asp running through town yelling obsenities made me laugh. What Tommy said was perfect, they don't know just how right he is, hehehe. I hope Charles has a long long stay. This was a perfect ending to a terrific book, thank you for sharing it with us. I do hope it brings you a lot of success. I do hope you'll post another story soon.
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Thank you so very much for this amazing review and all the stars, my friend. I'm just so pleased that you enjoyed how it ended. Thank you! Sandra xxx
Comment from giraffmang
Very nice, well-worked out and satisfying conclusion to this book and the trilogy. Very nice closing line, funny and apt.
I did notice in this piece that sometimes you clipped the 'g' from ing words for Mildred and other times don't.
He'd a been dead if you hadn't sorted it and look what the world would've missed out on with his scientific discovery" - need punctuation before the closing speech marks here.
I know, it's right weird, isn't it. - you may need a question mark here.
All the best
G
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Very nice, well-worked out and satisfying conclusion to this book and the trilogy. Very nice closing line, funny and apt.
I did notice in this piece that sometimes you clipped the 'g' from ing words for Mildred and other times don't.
He'd a been dead if you hadn't sorted it and look what the world would've missed out on with his scientific discovery" - need punctuation before the closing speech marks here.
I know, it's right weird, isn't it. - you may need a question mark here.
All the best
G
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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There were quite a few 'g's left on Mildred's words. I've been over it all again. It doesn't matter how many times I check it out, there are always some I've missed. This is what I like about my reviewers, they will point them out. Thank you, Gareth, for another lovely review, I'm glad you liked the way it all ended. Who knows, Mildred and co, might want to be dragged back out again some time. Not yet a while. I've promised Eric I'd write some more adventures for him. Big hugs, my friend, and thank you for all your help over the last three plus years that I've been writing the three books. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You gave this story a fantastic ending. I loved all the stories that went before this one and loved this one too. You have a great set on your hands. WONDERFUL!!!
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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You gave this story a fantastic ending. I loved all the stories that went before this one and loved this one too. You have a great set on your hands. WONDERFUL!!!
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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What a wonderful review from a wonderful novelist! Thank you so much, Barbara. You've been so supportive with all your reviews throughout all three books, I can't begin to thank you enough. A big hug for the six stars, my friends. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from rama devi
What a great epilogue, dear. your development of MIldred's character is phenomenal! Great closing note. GReat pacing, characterization in general, dialog diction and sentence mechanics. Just a few spag nits to note:
*That's when I started helpin' in the hospital an' first met Tommy,(;) I were twenty-seven.
*An'(,) by the way, that other me don't know nothin'
* I was asked if I'd help you and dear Mrs Humphries(,) who were being ill-treated by her father-in-law, Sir John.
*"When those powers told me what they wanted, there weren't a chance I'd be saying no, (')cause me family wouldn't've been born.
"There has t' be a reason, (')cause if I don't..."
* Mildred was right, the fact that she was now back to being the old Nanny Mildred,(NO COMMA) didn't faze them at all.
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We sat down that night after the children had gone to bed(,) and Mildred began her story again for James.
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The Admiralty regrets to inform us that Vice Admiral Charles Pembrock has been detained in the Bethlem Psychiatric Hospital for his own, and bystander's(,) protection
I enjoyed reading your work, and feel sorry I could not get to every chapter. I love time-travel stories, and this is a good one!
Bravo!
Love,
rd
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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What a great epilogue, dear. your development of MIldred's character is phenomenal! Great closing note. GReat pacing, characterization in general, dialog diction and sentence mechanics. Just a few spag nits to note:
*That's when I started helpin' in the hospital an' first met Tommy,(;) I were twenty-seven.
*An'(,) by the way, that other me don't know nothin'
* I was asked if I'd help you and dear Mrs Humphries(,) who were being ill-treated by her father-in-law, Sir John.
*"When those powers told me what they wanted, there weren't a chance I'd be saying no, (')cause me family wouldn't've been born.
"There has t' be a reason, (')cause if I don't..."
* Mildred was right, the fact that she was now back to being the old Nanny Mildred,(NO COMMA) didn't faze them at all.
*
We sat down that night after the children had gone to bed(,) and Mildred began her story again for James.
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The Admiralty regrets to inform us that Vice Admiral Charles Pembrock has been detained in the Bethlem Psychiatric Hospital for his own, and bystander's(,) protection
I enjoyed reading your work, and feel sorry I could not get to every chapter. I love time-travel stories, and this is a good one!
Bravo!
Love,
rd
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Rama, you have made my day! To have a six from you is like winning the lottery, thank you so very much. I've made all the corrections, my friend. Your review of this part, in fact, the whole series has been wonderful, thank you! :)) Sandra xx
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My pleasure, dear! :-))) xxoo
Comment from royowen
What Ans excellent finish, and such a great tidying up of a fabulous story dear Sandra, very neat indeed, so Mildred was in on the know how all the time, I love the clever way you have wrapped this up, it's really a gigantic achievement in this smooth, brilliant and slick accomplishment, wonderful episode and book, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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What Ans excellent finish, and such a great tidying up of a fabulous story dear Sandra, very neat indeed, so Mildred was in on the know how all the time, I love the clever way you have wrapped this up, it's really a gigantic achievement in this smooth, brilliant and slick accomplishment, wonderful episode and book, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Oh, Roy, thank you so very much, you brought a big lump to my throat. You've been with me from the very beginning of the trilogy, and I honestly can't thank you enough for all the support you have given me over that time. Thank you, my very dear friend! And a huge hug for the six stars. Sandra xxxx
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Blessyou Sandra
Comment from S.M.E.Schultz
A beautiful wrap-up. I'm happy to know the Admiral's fate was apt. And now I am going back to read the entire book! I hope to see the trilogy in print!
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reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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A beautiful wrap-up. I'm happy to know the Admiral's fate was apt. And now I am going back to read the entire book! I hope to see the trilogy in print!
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Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Thank you so much for reading this part. I'm glad you enjoyed the ending. The first two books are already in print, this one will be soon. The final editing has been done up to this chapter, but I think it will still have one last going over. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sadnra xx
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Aw, thank you so much, I'm going to put out a message when it's published and then see if they can be promoted as a set. :) xx
Comment from alexisleech
It seems bitter-sweet to be reading the last chapter because, much though I enjoyed it, knowing the book is finished makes me sad. Well done, my friend. There aren't many who can claim to have written a trilogy, and to such a high standard with superb characters.
I look forward to seeing it on the big screen one day!
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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It seems bitter-sweet to be reading the last chapter because, much though I enjoyed it, knowing the book is finished makes me sad. Well done, my friend. There aren't many who can claim to have written a trilogy, and to such a high standard with superb characters.
I look forward to seeing it on the big screen one day!
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Thank you so very much, Alexis, for this wonderful review and all those lovely stars. I can't thank you enough, my friend. You've been with me all through the three books, and that means so much to me. Biggest hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx