This Time - That Time 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "Mildred Talks To Amelia"Third book in the time travel trilogy
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Comment from SLMorrical
This is a great chapter. I like how Veronica and Gladys are ghost listening to the conversation. I hope that Mildred address Tommy about his suspicions about his mother's death. I think Amelia knows Gladys is a ghost and there. Why else would she be jumpy on the subject. Looking forward to see how the conversation goes with Mildred and Amelia. Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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This is a great chapter. I like how Veronica and Gladys are ghost listening to the conversation. I hope that Mildred address Tommy about his suspicions about his mother's death. I think Amelia knows Gladys is a ghost and there. Why else would she be jumpy on the subject. Looking forward to see how the conversation goes with Mildred and Amelia. Well done.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much for the lovely review and shiny six stars, Sandra. I'll be posting the next part on Wednesday, let this one have its turn first. You'll find out then how the conversation goes. I'm sure you'll like it!! I'm delighted you enjoyed this part. Big hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from Mistydawn
Darn, I was so hoping it'd go well. Hopefully they can pick up the conversation from where they left off. That's if poor Mildred doesn't loose her nerve. It's well-written, very interesting moved the story along nicely, great job.
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Darn, I was so hoping it'd go well. Hopefully they can pick up the conversation from where they left off. That's if poor Mildred doesn't loose her nerve. It's well-written, very interesting moved the story along nicely, great job.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Yes, they will, you'll soon find out how it went. Wednesday. :) Thank you so much for this lovely review, my friend, I really appreciate it. Big hugs. Sandra xx
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Wow! What a great chapter! Bravo! I think maybe Amelia reacted that way at the mention of ghosts because she has had experience with them... or at least does believe they exist. She will be easy to convince, and the plan will work. How do I know? You would not dare deny me a happy ending. :)
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Wow! What a great chapter! Bravo! I think maybe Amelia reacted that way at the mention of ghosts because she has had experience with them... or at least does believe they exist. She will be easy to convince, and the plan will work. How do I know? You would not dare deny me a happy ending. :)
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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No, I wouldn't dare! lol. You'll find out on Wednesday, I'll be posting earlier now as I want to get this book finished. Thank you so very much for the lovely six stars, dear friend, and the wonderful, (bullying) review! LOL! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Sandra,
Uh oh... Lol
I wonder if she choked on her tea due to similar experiences with departed loved ones. Just a thought.
As always, this is a very intriguing and well-written piece. Nothing needing rwvision.
Thanks for sharing.
Jan :-)
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Hi Sandra,
Uh oh... Lol
I wonder if she choked on her tea due to similar experiences with departed loved ones. Just a thought.
As always, this is a very intriguing and well-written piece. Nothing needing rwvision.
Thanks for sharing.
Jan :-)
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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You'll find out on Wednesday, Jan. Thank you so much for this lovely review, my friend. I really appreciate it. Big hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I was hoping she would have that conversation in this chapter, Sandra. Amelia's reaction makes me think she
felt the presence of Gladys and therefore does believe she is hanging around. LOL I am looking forward to that part of the story. I love ghost stories and peoples reactions to them. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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I was hoping she would have that conversation in this chapter, Sandra. Amelia's reaction makes me think she
felt the presence of Gladys and therefore does believe she is hanging around. LOL I am looking forward to that part of the story. I love ghost stories and peoples reactions to them. Nancy:)
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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It will be in the next part, everyone is waiting for it, so I'll be posting it on Wednesday. I hope you'll like it. :)) Thank you so much for the lovely review, my friend. Big hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Sandra,
Good stuff here once again. Nothing ever really goes according to plan on the first attempt, now does it? lol
Martha came bustling in with her plate bacon and egg. - plate of bacon and eggs.
"If you sure it'll be alright, an' I won't be in your way,- should it be if you're sure here?
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Hi Sandra,
Good stuff here once again. Nothing ever really goes according to plan on the first attempt, now does it? lol
Martha came bustling in with her plate bacon and egg. - plate of bacon and eggs.
"If you sure it'll be alright, an' I won't be in your way,- should it be if you're sure here?
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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No, it doesn't, but that's life, at least it's mine! Thank you for finding those nits, Gareth, that happened when I edited while it was on here. I rushed it. I'm all out to get Charles now, no more sidetracking. :)) thanks for the lovely review, my friend. :))Sandra xxx
When are you posting again?
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Should be today at some point. I just posted a poem so the next instalment I'm giving a once over now.
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I'll watch out for it. :)) I've read the poem, as you now know!! lol
Comment from tfawcus
Oh dear - you never make it too easy for your characters do you? LOL Poor Mildred! Lovely pen picture of Amelia. I can just imagine her. I had an aunt rather like that who lived in Reigate in the 1950s.
You've certainly come up with an original simile in: " like a bucket of cement thrown over the side of an ocean liner"!
Just one typo to fix: "the door opened in and walked Mildred".
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Oh dear - you never make it too easy for your characters do you? LOL Poor Mildred! Lovely pen picture of Amelia. I can just imagine her. I had an aunt rather like that who lived in Reigate in the 1950s.
You've certainly come up with an original simile in: " like a bucket of cement thrown over the side of an ocean liner"!
Just one typo to fix: "the door opened in and walked Mildred".
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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i think we must have followed each other around. I was born in Shotley right on the Suffolk coast, 6 years later, we moved to Kent in the Medway towns, and Reigate was one of the 'sea-side' places that Mum would take us to in our summer school holidays. Then we moved south, to the Test Valley near the New Forest, and I've lived here ever since.
Thank you for spotting that nit, sometimes my fingers get ahead of themselves. lol. Thanks for the lovely review, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from alexisleech
Poor Mildred. She has the hardest job of all, dealing with the living, while Veronica and Gladys have all the fun spooking the Vice admiral. (I can't wait for that to happen again!)
Another super chapter that has me wanting more.
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Poor Mildred. She has the hardest job of all, dealing with the living, while Veronica and Gladys have all the fun spooking the Vice admiral. (I can't wait for that to happen again!)
Another super chapter that has me wanting more.
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much, my dear friend, for this lovely review and for the bright shiny 6 stars!! I really appreciate your reviews. Big hugs. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Sandra Montanino
I'm not sure if you're from the South, but you have a knack for capturing the voice. This is such an interesting story. How to convince Amelia that Charles killed Gladys? "How to do it without scaring Amelia half to death?" Such a creative story. Good job.
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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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I'm not sure if you're from the South, but you have a knack for capturing the voice. This is such an interesting story. How to convince Amelia that Charles killed Gladys? "How to do it without scaring Amelia half to death?" Such a creative story. Good job.
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Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Yes, I'm from the South of England. Thank you so much for this really nice review, Sandra. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. :)) Sandra xx
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The South of England. Wow. I was only an ocean away. LOL. I knew it was an accent from somewhere. Very well done!!
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LOL!! You all call it the pond, so not too far!
Comment from Heather Knight
I like the use of the first person as it makes us feel closer to the story.
I like this sentence:I could almost see her brain moving...
Very well written. Great dialogue.
Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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I like the use of the first person as it makes us feel closer to the story.
I like this sentence:I could almost see her brain moving...
Very well written. Great dialogue.
Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much, Maria. I'm so pleased you enjoyed reading this part. :)) Sandra xx