Comment from His Grayness

Excellent

I found this work to be very well written and presented in all dimensions, and I have no suggestions to improve upon it in any way. MY THANKS TO THIS AUTHOR FOR A FINE READ INDEED! HIS GRAYNESS; VANCE

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2019

Thank you so much, Vance for this fabulous review! I'm delighted you enjoyed reading this part. :)) Sandra xxx

reply by His Grayness on 04-Mar-2019

my joy indeed thanks to you! Vance

reply by His Grayness on 04-Mar-2019

fine work and keep the good stuff coming! Vance

reply by His Grayness on 04-Mar-2019

Thanks all belong to you Sandra! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance

Comment from Ulla

Exceptional

Hi Sandra, again a wonderful,chapter where they go from murdering the Vice-Admiral to catch him out for how he murdered Gladys, only to come back to murdering him again. But now, Mildred has a plan. A different one. Well, I'll have to wait and see what that is about. I love it!
22 degrees here today and bright sun. Wonderful. A big hug. Ulla xxxx

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2019

Thank you so much, Ulla, for the lovely six stars and fabulous review. Yes, they have been put off the idea of murdering the V.A. Not that I think Mildred could do it anyway! LOL. Big hug back, my friend. Sandra xxx

Comment from damommy

Exceptional

What a cliff hanger! I think under the circumstances, know what they know, they would be perfectly justified in killing the old guy. I don't know if I could do it, but when thinking of the outcome, maybe I could. Evidently, neither of them is going to, and Mildred has come up with a plan. I'm all ears . . .

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019

They certainly would, Yvonne, but James is right, they would never be able to live with the knowledge they had killed someone. Let's hope Mildred does have a good plan. Thank you so much for the lovely review and all those stars, my friend. I really appreciate your support. :)) Sandra xxxx

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

Mildred tried to convince herself she could do it. I know she wants to for the greater good, but I don't see the sweet little thing going through with it. So glad they found another way. The story is well-written, very interesting. I love the bit of humor you put in made it more realistic.

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 Comment Written 03-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019

Thank you for your wonderful review, my friend, I'm delighted you are still enjoying it. Now Veronica will be wanting Mildred to tell her what her plan is! :)) Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx

Comment from JDRBAR

Exceptional

I like reading about alternative ideas on how to accomplish something. It gets my itty bitty brain thinking of ways they might miss LOL Good job here. Couldn't find anything to criticize :(

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019

I'm glad about that, it means I'm improving!! LOL. Thank you so much for the 6 stars, my friend, and the lovely review. Biggest hugs. :)) Sandra xx

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Exceptional

You left a fantastic hook. I can't wait to hear Mildred's idea on getting that evil man to confess to Gladys' murder. We all know he did it and he needs to be stopped before he changes history.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019

Thank you so much, Barbara, for all those stars. Yes, he did it alright, but we have to prove it. We'll see what Mildred has to say about her idea. :)) Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Exceptional

Great chapter! You have to tell me Mildred's idea... NOW! If not now (I know how stubborn you are), then post again verrrrry soon.

At least tell me if I guess right.

Veronica can get close while invisible, holding a cell phone set to record him. He'll be so confused and guilty when she asked why he did it that he'll talk about.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019

It must be sooooo cold in that freezer, Phyllis!! LOL. Wrong!

Thank you so very much for the six stars, my friend. I was going to email you later, you haven't posted for ages. I hope you're ok? I've missed you. Big hugs :)) Sandra xxxx

reply by Phyllis Stewart on 03-Mar-2019

I'm about to email you now. I'm okay, bu...

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Very nice chapter. I think you have a great
balance between the past and present sections which works very well.

"What I do know is," she continued. "I don't want t' be livin' me life - I feel it should be a comma after the tag as it is a continuing sentence in the dialogue.

or livin' in one of them wotsits' either."- don't think you need he mark after wotsits.

It would make front page news, how you, a working girl murdered a highly respected Vice Admiral- possibly a comma after girl here.

Perfect end spot once again. lol
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 Comment Written 03-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019

Thank you so much, Gareth. I've corrected those silly nits. the one over, wotsits, was supposed to be a comma, not an apostrophe, now I'm not sure if I should have a comma there or not.

I'm getting on with my story for the contest. I'm hoping it won't be too long!! :)